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you recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he /she should get a job.Dear kacchi Hope you are doing great. Thank you for writing to me. You ask me what would do next step about wheather go to College or to try to get a job. I would suggest to you that you need to some work experience before you go to college. I personally know you because you are my best friend. I know you need to some work experience for job field. I also know you like to do work than to go to college. You need to do work for money because you have a lovely sweet mother. I joined University just after finishing High School. I could not get any job experience in my field. I personally believed that you will success with your job. You gain some valuable skills, managing time, dealings with people and It will grow your confident. I hope my suggestion would help you and I always pray for you. You will success your life. Your faithfull

you recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he /she should get a job. Dear kacchi Hope you are doing great. Thank you for writing to me. You ask me what would do next step about wheather go to College or to try to get a job. I would suggest to you that you need to some work experience before you go to college. I personally know you because you are my best friend. I know you need to some work experience for job field. I also know you like to do work than to go to college. You need to do work for money because you have a lovely sweet mother. I joined University just after finishing High School. I could not get any job experience in my field. I personally believed that you will success with your job. You gain some valuable skills, managing time, dealings with people and It will grow your confident. I hope my suggestion would help you and I always pray for you. You will success your life. Your faithfull WyolD

Dear kacchi Hope you are doing great. Thank you for writing to me. You ask me what would do next step about wheather go to College or to try to get a job. I would suggest to you that you need to some work experience before you go to college. I personally know you because you are my best friend. I know you need to some work experience for job field. I also know you like to do work than to go to college. You need to do work for money because you have a lovely sweet mother. I joined University just after finishing High School. I could not get any job experience in my field. I personally believed that you will success with your job. You gain some valuable skills, managing time, dealings with people and It will grow your confident. I hope my suggestion would help you and I always pray for you. You will success your life. Your faithfully Hridoy

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