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Describe your family member

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I belong to nuclear family there have four member in my family my brother mother father and me my father has farmer my mother has house wife and my brother studying in 11 standard in vps school and I belong to Sikh culture we do lot of things together such as eat east together watching TV together so on. We all family respect each other decision and they give me proper guidance regarding my studies

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 in my family my brother mother father and me my father has farmer my mother has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 wife and my brother studying in 11 standard in Possible spelling mistake found.VPSVPsvsupsGPSVP
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 school and I belong to Sikh culture we do It seems that an article is missing.a lot of
lot of
 things together such as eat east together watching TV together This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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 on. We all family respect each other Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).decision, and
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 they give me proper guidance regarding my Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphstudies.studies!studies?studies:studies,studies;
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IELTS letter Describe your family member

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

74 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 5.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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