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Recently went to visit your friendIn their new home

Recently went to visit your friendIn their new home pR6E2
Dear Anna, I am writing to congratulate you for your beautiful home. It was great to visit you because I like the furniture of your new home. The eye-catching and decorative walls gives me a curiosity to live in that kind of home in my future. I enjoyed the most when we all danced together. Dancing added a spice at party. Moreover, as I did cooking as well which gave me an immense pleasure during my stay with you. I would like to meet again after one month during exams exams at your home. It will be an ideal place to study for both of us due to the peaceful surroundings. Hopeful to hear back from you soon. Best regards, Smith
Dear Anna,

I am writing to congratulate you for your
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beautiful
home. It was great to visit you
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because
I like the furniture of your new home. The eye-catching and decorative walls gives me a curiosity to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in that kind of home in my future.

I enjoyed the most when we all danced together. Dancing
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added
a spice at party.
Moreover
, as I
The usual collocation for an activity ending in "-ing" is "go" not "do" or "play." Revise: "went cooking".
did cooking
as well
which gave me an immense pleasure during my stay with you.

I would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
again after one month during
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exams exams
at your home. It will be an ideal place to study for both of us due to the peaceful surroundings.

Hopeful to hear back from you
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soon
.

Best regards,

Smith
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IELTS letter Recently went to visit your friendIn their new home

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  American English
7 paragraphs
120 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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