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You recently bought a camera while travelling overseas. When you got to your destination you discovered that some important items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the local representative of the company. In your letter give details of the camera and where you bought it explain what has happened say what you want him/her to do about it

You recently bought a camera while travelling overseas. When you got to your destination you discovered that some important items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the local representative of the company. In your letter give details of the camera and where you bought it explain what has happened say what you want him/her to do about it BJmQ9
Dear Sir/Madam. I am writing this letter to express my concern about the missing part of the product I purchased from your outlet located in Dubai. I visited Dubai two days back and I bought a Samsung camera in black colour from your city center branch. It’s model is S21 ultra 5G. I remember, it cost me around $120 and I paid through my Master Visa card. Moreover, when I reached my destination and opened the box to use it, I was surprised to see that the camera charger was missing from the container. Now I am unable to use it for my business trip for which I specially bought it. Furthermore, I am no longer in dubai and can not receive the missing item. I want your customer service department to reach me as soon as possible along with the charger. It happened because of your staff’s negligence, they should have checked the box before selling me. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully ABC
Dear Sir/Madam.

I am writing this letter to express my concern about the missing part of the product I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
from your outlet located in Dubai.

I visited Dubai two days back and I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
a Samsung camera in black
Possible spelling mistake. 'colour' is British English.
colour
from your city center branch.
Did you mean "Its"?
It’s
model is S21 ultra 5G. I remember, it cost me around $120 and I paid through my Master Visa card.

Moreover
, when I reached my destination and opened the box to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
it, I
was surprised
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
that the camera charger was missing from the container.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
I am unable to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
it for my business trip for which I
specially
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
it.

Furthermore
, I am no longer in
Possible spelling mistake found.
dubai
and can not receive the missing item. I want your customer service department to reach me as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible along with the charger. It happened
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of your staff’s negligence, they should have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
checked
the box
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
selling me.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully


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IELTS letter You recently bought a camera while travelling overseas. When you got to your destination you discovered that some important items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the local representative of the company. In your letter give details of the camera and where you bought it explain what has happened say what you want him/her to do about it

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  American English
7 paragraphs
167 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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