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You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work. Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working, in your letter 1. Describe the work you have been doing 2. Explain why you can no longer do this work 3. Recommend another person who is interested in the work.

You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work. Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working, in your letter 1. Describe the work you have been doing 2. Explain why you can no longer do this work 3. Recommend another person who is interested in the work. 2bQgX
Dear sir or madam, I’m writing this letter to draw your attention regarding my voluntary teaching work which I have been doing since last 5 years at your charity ‘Hope Not Out’. I currently teach underprivileged children in your school unfortunately, I would not be able to continue any more due to my other commitments. I started a new job and i need to relocate to Perth next week on permanent basis. As a result, it is not possible for me to come every week in Melbourne for community work. Finally I recommend one of my friend John, he currently active in different welfare work. He has expressed his interest to volunteer and I believe he will be the good addition in your team. It was a good experience to work with you and I can’t thank enough to provide me noble opportunity to serve. I’m looking forward to work with your organisation in the future. Yours faithfully, Syed
Dear sir or madam,

I’m writing this letter to draw your attention regarding my voluntary teaching
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
which I have been doing since last 5 years at your charity ‘Hope Not Out’. I
currently
teach underprivileged children in your school unfortunately, I would not be able to continue
Did you mean the adverb "anymore"?
any more
due to my other commitments.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
a new job and
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
need to relocate to Perth
next
week on permanent basis.
As a result
, it is not possible for me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
every week in Melbourne for community work.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Finally
I recommend one of my friend John,
It seems that a verb is missing.
he
currently
active in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
welfare
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
. He has expressed his interest to volunteer and I believe he will be the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
addition in your team.

It was a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
experience to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
with you and I can’t thank
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
to provide me noble opportunity to serve. I’m looking forward to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
with your
Possible spelling mistake. 'organisation' is British English.
organisation
in the future.

Yours
faithfully
,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Syed

IELTS letter You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work. Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working, in your letter 1. Describe the work you have been doing 2. Explain why you can no longer do this work 3. Recommend another person who is interested in the work.

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158 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
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