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Your friend from overseas is coming to visit you next month. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell them what they need to bring tell them what they will be doing during the time they are visiting warn them about some things that might be challenging

Your friend from overseas is coming to visit you next month. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell them what they need to bring tell them what they will be doing during the time they are visiting warn them about some things that might be challenging 15wYN
Hey Sarah, I’m so happy you are coming to visit me next month and wanted to give you some important details about your stay here in Ho Chi Minh City. Before you come, make sure that you have the correct visa or you’ll have problems at the airport. You’ll also want to bring some high quality mosquito repellent. If you aren’t protected, the mosquitos will eat you alive out here. These are the only things you’ll really need, aside from the things you would normally bring. There are so many things for us to do when you arrive. We’ll be spending the first few days in the city, but after that we can explore other parts of the country. Vietnam is a beautiful place, with so much to see and experience. I know you’ll enjoy your time here. With that said, there is something that I want to warn you about. The way people drive in this country is absolutely insane. It’s every man for himself on the road and nobody follows the rules. Luckily, we’ll be travelling by train most of the time, so we won’t be in the mix too much. I look forward to seeing you soon! Tom
Hey Sarah,

I’m
so
happy you are coming to visit me
next
month and wanted to give you
some
important
details
about your stay here in Ho Chi Minh City.

Before
you
come
,
make
sure that you have the correct visa or you’ll have problems at the airport. You’ll
also
want to bring
some
high quality mosquito repellent. If you aren’t protected, the
mosquitos
will eat you alive out here. These are the
only
things you’ll
really
need, aside from the things you would
normally
bring.

There are
so
many
things for us to do when you arrive. We’ll be spending the
first
few days in the city,
but
after that we can explore other parts of the country. Vietnam is a
beautiful
place, with
so
much to
see
and experience. I know you’ll enjoy your time here.

With that said, there is something that I want to warn you about. The way
people
drive in this country is
absolutely
insane. It’s every
man
for himself on the road and nobody follows the
rules
. Luckily, we’ll be travelling by train most of the time,
so
we won’t be in the mix too much.

I look forward to seeing you
soon
!

Tom
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IELTS letter Your friend from overseas is coming to visit you next month. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell them what they need to bring tell them what they will be doing during the time they are visiting warn them about some things that might be challenging

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
200 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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