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You have enrolled in an evening course but you have found that you are too busy to continue and would like to take the course next term instead.

You have enrolled in an evening course but you have found that you are too busy to continue and would like to take the course next term instead. VBxkD
Dear Mr. Smith I am writing regarding the management course that I have been attending at your management institute at the evening hours. I need to say that, unfortunately, due to my involvement in an urgent task at my work, I will not be able to continue my management classes during the coming period. As you are aware, I am working as a project manager in a construction compay. A new contract has been awarded to our company, and I have been given the mission to complete this project in a tight time frame. In this situation, I will have to stay extra hours at my office to ensure that the work progresses satisfactorily. However, I am still interested in completing the management couse, but I would prefer to reschedule it to the next term when I will have completed my new project and can spare enough time for studying. I will appreciate it if you could direct me to the appropriate action that I have to take in order to arrange for postponing my course. I thank you in advance for your assistance. Kindest regards Matt Davison
Dear Mr. Smith

I am writing regarding the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
management
course that I have been attending at your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
management
institute at the evening hours. I need to say that, unfortunately, due to my involvement in an urgent task at my work, I will not be able to continue my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
management
classes during the coming period.

As you are aware, I am working as a project manager in a construction
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compay
. A new contract has
been awarded
to our
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company
, and I have been
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given
the mission to complete this project in a tight time frame. In this situation, I will
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have to
stay extra hours at my office to ensure that the work progresses
satisfactorily
.

However
, I am
still
interested in completing the
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management
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couse
,
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but
I would prefer to reschedule it to the
next
term when I will have completed my new project and can spare
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
time for studying. I will appreciate it if you could direct me to the appropriate action that I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
take in order to arrange for postponing my course.

I thank you in advance for your assistance.

Kindest regards

Matt
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Davison
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IELTS letter You have enrolled in an evening course but you have found that you are too busy to continue and would like to take the course next term instead.

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  American English
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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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