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Write a letter to the college headmaster asking him about financial support for one of the courses that you are really keen on doing. In your letter give details of the course, why are you interested in this particular course and what is the reason for requesting financial support

Write a letter to the college headmaster asking him about financial support for one of the courses that you are really keen on doing. In your letter give details of the course, why are you interested in this particular course and what is the reason for requesting financial support GMXLx
Dear sir, This is in reference to the certified course in completion law which is for a tenure of 6 months having 2 semesters notification of the same is uploaded on the college website. As you are aware that I am pursuing competition law as my specification during mh 6 th semester of legum baccalaureate and bu completing the aforementioned course i will be able to explore kore career opportunities as well as it will enhancing mh knowledge and skills. The course will begin in the month of may so i need to reserve my seat by submitting the application form and the tution fees. However, i do not have sufficient funds available to understand the course therefore I would request for a student’s loan. Due to covid pandemic my family has gone through financial crises, wherefore I do not want to put pressure on them for my academic qualification. Requesting you to kindly share the eligibility criteria required for the student loan abd several other terms and conditions Waiting for a favourable response Your sincerely Pooja
Dear sir, This is in reference to the certified
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course
in completion law which is for a tenure of 6 months having 2 semesters notification of the same
is uploaded
on the college website. As you are aware that I am pursuing competition law as my specification during
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mh
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6 th
semester of
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legum
baccalaureate and
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bu
completing the aforementioned
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course
Did you mean "I"?
i
will be able to explore
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kore
career opportunities
as well
as it will
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enhancing
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mh
knowledge and
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skills
. The
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course
will
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begin
in the month of may
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so
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i
need to reserve my seat by submitting the application form and the
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tution
fees.
However
,
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i
do not have sufficient funds available to understand the
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course
therefore
I would request for a student’s loan. Due to
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
covid
pandemic my family has gone through financial crises, wherefore I do not want to put pressure on them for my academic qualification. Requesting you to kindly share the eligibility criteria required for the student loan
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abd
several other terms and conditions Waiting for a
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favourable
response Your
sincerely
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Pooja
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the college headmaster asking him about financial support for one of the courses that you are really keen on doing. In your letter give details of the course, why are you interested in this particular course and what is the reason for requesting financial support

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