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you are doing some part time course . for some reason you are not able to continue this course give reason and furtur continue.

you are doing some part time course. for some reason you are not able to continue this course give reason and furtur continue. e5Yap
Dear Mr. David Thomson, I hope everything is going well. I am a part time student in your french learning class. I would like to inform you that I am not able to continue my course at this time because of some serious reason. I really appreiciate your way of teaching and enjoying the course too. Moving further, I am doing full time job in health department. While taking the covid 19 situations into account I am not allow to finish my work earlier and also I am suffering with mental and physical pressure at work. As the result of that, I have limited time for myself. Morever, I decided to leave the course at present time and will attend the claases with next section, with the hope to get this scenario well. I consider You may understand my condition. Please let me know in the starting of new session. Yours faithfully, John carrier.
Dear Mr. David Thomson,

I hope everything is going well. I am a part
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
student in your
"French" needs to be capitalized when not used as a verb.
french
learning
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class
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would like to inform you that I am not able to continue my course at this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
serious reason.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
really
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appreiciate
your way of teaching and enjoying the course too. Moving
further
, I am doing full
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
job in health department. While taking the
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
covid 19
situations into account I am not
Consider using a past participle here: "allowed".
allow
to finish my work earlier and
also
I am suffering with mental and physical pressure at work. As the result of that, I have limited
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
for myself.

Possible spelling mistake found.
Morever
, I decided to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
the course at present
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
and will attend the
Possible spelling mistake found.
claases
with
next
section, with the hope to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
this scenario well.

I consider You may understand my condition.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know in the starting of new session.

Yours
faithfully
,

John carrier.

IELTS letter you are doing some part time course. for some reason you are not able to continue this course give reason and furtur continue.

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  American English
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154 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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