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You are visiting another town next month for a short break. Write a letter to the tourist information centre. In your letter

You are visiting another town next month for a short break. Write a letter to the tourist information centre. In your letter 0Ae55

Dear Sir or Maddam, I hope you are doing well. I would like to get some information from you regarding the place called Ali-shan in the Taichung area. I will be there next month and I think I will spend about 3 days, because I heard that place is nice and relaxing. If you have any recommendations, the place to stay in it would be helpful for me. It would be great if you could help me give direction from Taipei to Ali-shan. I’m thinking of using the Taiwan High Speed Rail from Taipei main station to Taichung. However from Taichung station to Ali-shan I have no idea how to get there. If you have any information regarding local events nearby please do let me know. I would like to join and try some local street foods, take some pictures and maybe learn a new culture. I’m looking forward to your reply. Regards, Kevin

Dear Sir or Possible spelling mistake found.SaddamMadamMad dam
Maddam
,

I hope you are doing well. I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 information from you regarding the place called Ali-shan in the Taichung area. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 will be there next
 month and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 I will spend about 3 days, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I heard that place is nice and relaxing. If you have any recommendations, the place to stay in it would be helpful for me.

It would be great if you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me give direction from Taipei to Ali-shan. I’m thinking of using the Taiwan High Speed Rail from Taipei main station to Taichung. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 from Taichung station to Ali-shan I have no This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 how to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 there.

“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 you have any information regarding local This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
 nearby This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 do This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know. I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 and try This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 local street foods, take This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 pictures and maybe learn a new culture.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Regards,

Kevin

IELTS letter You are visiting another town next month for a short break. Write a letter to the tourist information centre. In your letter

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

153 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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