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Unable to continue volunteering activity

Unable to continue volunteering activity WyQ8D

Dear Sir/Madam, I am Dr. Rakesh from Urapakkam area of Chennai. As you may be knowing me that I am involved in the plantation drive as a volunteer in this area. I have been in this volunteering service for the past six months and thoroughly enjoying it. Recently a month ago, I was offered a job at NIT Trichy and I have agreed to join the institute. I am also moving to the same place in about a week and settle there. Hence, it would not be possible for me to continue as a volunteer in the plantation drive due to my unavailability in Urapakkam after a week. However, to my surprise, I was able to connect with a volunteer who was carrying out a similar service few years ago. He is Mr. Ashok and he has kindly accepted my request to fill in the shoes and continue the volunteering activity from where I have left. I hope that my unavailability will not hamper the plantation drive in anyway and I would love to see an increased green cover in Urapakkam when I return back after few months. Yours Sincerely, Rakesh Kumar

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am Dr. Rakesh from Possible spelling mistake found.
Urapakkam
 area of Chennai. As you may The verb 'knowing' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
be knowing
 me that I am involved
 in the plantation drive as a volunteer in this area. I have been in this volunteering service for the past six months and thoroughly
 enjoying it.

Recently a month ago, I was offered
 a job at NIT Possible spelling mistake found.Tricky
Trichy
 and I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesced
agreed
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 the institute. I am also
 moving to the same place in about a week and settle there. Hence
, it would not be possible for me to continue as a volunteer in the plantation drive due to my unavailability in Possible spelling mistake found.
Urapakkam
 after a week.

However
, to my surprise, I was able to connect with a volunteer who was carrying out a similar service few years ago. He is Mr. Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).Ashok, and
Ashok and
 he has kindly This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
accepted
 my request to fill in the shoes and continue the volunteering activity from where I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
. I hope that my unavailability will not hamper the plantation drive Did you mean "in any way"?in any way
in anyway
 and I would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 an increased green cover in Possible spelling mistake found.
Urapakkam
 when I Consider using "return".return
return back
 after few months.

Yours Sincerely
,

Rakesh Kumar

IELTS letter Unable to continue volunteering activity

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American English

6 paragraphs

191 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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Lexical Resource: 5.5

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Grammatical Range: 6.5

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Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

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