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Your friend from England is making a business trip to your town. She has never visited your country before and wants to know what you can do together in free time. Type a letter to your friend. In your letter Describe some activities for her free time Suggest some restaurants/food in your town offer to meet her

Your friend from England is making a business trip to your town. She has never visited your country before and wants to know what you can do together in free time. Type a letter to your friend. In your letter Describe some activities for her free time Suggest some restaurants/food in your town offer to meet her g5WxD
Dear Maria, I hope my letter finds you in good health. As a start, let me express my happiness for the amazing news I have heard. The fact of me being able to meet you after all these years gives pleasure to my heart. Moreover, I am sure that you are very excited to discover my home country and I would like to help you by pointing out some activities you can do in your free time. Thus, please make sure to go shopping in Hamra streets, swimming in our beautiful sea, visiting the mountain and Jeita grotto. In addition to this, don't forget to taste the Lebanese Mezza such as Tabbouleh, Hummus and Kibbe. Make sure to visit the Leila restaurant at ABC Verdun, it is known to be the best in town. Finally, my working hours are from 8 am to 5 pm, therefore I am at your disposal starting 6 pm to meet and enjoy activities in my motherland. Looking forward to seeing you and spending a wonderful time together. Best Regards, Miriam Medawar
Dear Maria,

I hope my letter finds you in
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good
health.

As a
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start
,
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let
me express my happiness for the amazing news I have heard. The fact of me being able to
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meet
you
after all
these years gives pleasure to my heart.
Moreover
, I am sure that you are
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very
excited to discover my home country and I would like to
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help
you by pointing out
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some
activities you can do in your free time.
Thus
,
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please
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make
sure to go shopping in
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Hamra
streets, swimming in our
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beautiful
sea, visiting the mountain and
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Jeita
grotto.
In addition
to this, don't forget to taste the Lebanese
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Mezza
such as Tabbouleh, Hummus and
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Kibbe
.
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Make
sure to visit the Leila restaurant at ABC Verdun, it
is known
to be the best in town.
Finally
, my working hours are from 8 am to 5 pm,
therefore
I am at your disposal starting 6 pm to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
and enjoy activities in my motherland.

Looking forward to seeing you and spending a wonderful time together.

Best Regards,

Miriam
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Medawar
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IELTS letter Your friend from England is making a business trip to your town. She has never visited your country before and wants to know what you can do together in free time. Type a letter to your friend. In your letter Describe some activities for her free time Suggest some restaurants/food in your town offer to meet her

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  American English
6 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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