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You recently went to a restaurant but think you could have left your credit card behind. Write to the restaurant. In your letter Tell them when you went there Describe where you think you may have left the credit card Explain what you would like the restaurant to do

You recently went to a restaurant but think you could have left your credit card behind. Write to the restaurant. In your letter Tell them when you went there Describe where you think you may have left the credit card Explain what you would like the restaurant to do RNRwM
Dear Sir, I was a frequent customer for your restaurant since its opening. Last week, I visited your main branch on Friday 23, March. I did not remember exact timing, though it's for the dinner only, unfortunately, I forget my credit card after that visit. I realised that thing yesterday, only when I was planning to purchase the groceries over online and even I am not sure about where I forgot that. I assume the restaurant will be having more chances to have my credit check. In that case, the card will be around the table which is near to the back side door. Every time I use to sit in that place since it's having a nice view of the entire restaurant and even more comfortable for the singles. In addition to that check the cash counter as well in case your team not able get it from the table. However, by any chance, if you or your staff found my credit card, then I would like to handover it to your cashier. The reason why to submit to him is, he is living near to my community and it's just 5 minutes walk. I will collect it from him. Thank you very much for considering. Yours faithfully, Meera Shareef
Dear Sir,

I was a frequent customer for your restaurant since its opening.

Last week, I visited your main branch on Friday 23, March. I did not remember exact timing, though it's for the dinner
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
, unfortunately, I forget my credit card after that visit. I
Possible spelling mistake. 'realised' is British English.
realised
that thing yesterday,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
when I was planning to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
the groceries over online and even I am not sure about where I forgot that.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
assume the restaurant will be having more chances to have my credit
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
.
In that case
, the card will be around the table which is near to the back side door.

Every time I
Make sure that 'use to' is correct. For habitual actions in the past or to mean 'accustomed to', use "used to".
use to
sit in that place since it's having a nice view of the entire restaurant and even more comfortable for the singles.
In addition
to that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
the cash counter
as well
in case your team not able
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
it from the table.

However
, by any chance, if you or your staff found my credit card, then I would like to handover it to your cashier. The reason why to submit to him is, he is living near to my community and it's
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
5 minutes walk. I will collect it from him.

Thank you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
much for considering.

Yours
faithfully
,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Meera
Shareef

IELTS letter You recently went to a restaurant but think you could have left your credit card behind. Write to the restaurant. In your letter Tell them when you went there Describe where you think you may have left the credit card Explain what you would like the restaurant to do

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
210 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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