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write a letter to your friend ask sorry for breaking the tea set tell how it happened tel how would you make up for it

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Dear Neha, Hope you are fine, and I am really sorry for not writing to you any sooner. Although I wished to have contacted you earlier, but there is a reason for the delay. The tea set I borrowed from you, last week for the tea party, got broken by me. I beg you to forgive me as I'm really sorry for the incidence. I was extremely careful with the set, which I know you bought from China during your visit last year, but my dog hit the table on which the set was placed and it fell off and broke to pieces. This happened so suddenly that I could not do anything, I regret letting the dog in. Since I knew apologizing alone won't be enough; therefore I tried to figure out a way to mend my mistake. Even though it was not easy, fortunately I was able to find the same set online. I ordered it right away and it has just arrived. Although all of this took a lot of time, resulting in the delay in writing to you, I promise that there won't be any further postponements and I will be sending you the new set as soon as possible. Hope you accept my apology and forgive me.
Dear
Neha
,

Hope you are fine, and I am
really
sorry for not writing to you any sooner. Although I wished to have contacted you earlier,
but
there is a reason for the delay. The tea set I borrowed from you, last week for the tea party,
got
broken by me. I beg you to forgive me as I'm
really
sorry for the incidence.

I was
extremely
careful with the set, which I know you
bought
from China during your visit last year,
but
my dog hit the table on which the set
was placed
and it fell off and broke to pieces. This happened
so
suddenly
that I could not do anything, I regret letting the dog in.

Since I knew apologizing alone won't be
enough
;
therefore
I tried to figure out a way to mend my mistake.
Even though
it was not easy,
fortunately
I was able to find the same set online. I ordered it right away and it has
just
arrived. Although all of this took
a lot of
time, resulting in the delay in writing to you, I promise that there won't be any
further
postponements and I will be sending you the new set as
soon
as possible.

Hope you accept my apology and forgive me.
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IELTS letter write a letter to your friend ask sorry for breaking the tea set tell how it happened tel how would you make up for it

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  American English
5 paragraphs
212 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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