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Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: • Give details of the food and services you ordered • Describe the problems that occurred • Explain what you want the restaurant to do

Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: • Give details of the food and services you ordered • Describe the problems that occurred • Explain what you want the restaurant to do g5WAg
Dear Sir, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the food and services offered during my last visit. Actually, last week I came for a dinner with my office colleagues. However, this dinner happened to be a big disaster. On Saturday 27th April, all my office fellows decided to celebrate project success. So, we decided to dine at your restaurant. I had already reserved a table for four in advance, so that we do not have to wait in queue. Despite, the booking, we still had to wait. Although, we got our table, but still we could not settle down since it was not cleaned. The services were not very organized. However, we ordered food which again got delayed, due less staff. Also, we were expecting a an amazing live band performance, since it was a Satudary. But, later we got to that due some internal issues all events have been cancelled. I have frequently visited your restaurant. But, this time I was extremely embarrassed by the overall services. I want a compensation for that particular evening. Please provide a 50% discount all food and services on our next visit. We did not create any scene like other customers because that would hamper your reputation. Hence, you will understand my request and act on it. Yours faithfully, Shreya
Dear Sir,

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the food and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
services
offered during my last visit. Actually, last week I came for a dinner with my office colleagues.
However
, this dinner happened to be a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
disaster.

On Saturday 27th April, all my office fellows decided to celebrate project success.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, we decided to dine at your restaurant. I had already reserved a table for four in advance,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that we do not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
wait in queue. Despite, the booking, we
still
had to wait. Although, we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
our table,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
still
we could not settle down since it was not cleaned. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
services
were not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
organized.
However
, we ordered food which again
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
delayed, due less staff.
Also
, we were expecting
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a an
amazing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
band performance, since it was a
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Satudary
.
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But
, later we
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got
to that due
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
internal issues all
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
events
have
been cancelled
.

I have
frequently
visited your restaurant.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
, this time I was
extremely
embarrassed by the
overall
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
services
. I want a compensation for that particular evening.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
provide a 50% discount all food and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
services
on our
next
visit.

We did not create any scene like other customers
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
that would hamper your reputation.
Hence
, you will understand my request and act on it.

Yours
faithfully
,

Shreya
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: • Give details of the food and services you ordered • Describe the problems that occurred • Explain what you want the restaurant to do

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
218 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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