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You have found an interesting website. Tell about the website to your friend. Tell the friend, how this website will help in education Dlwo6
Dear Max, I would like to share with you a website for improving of your English, it is named Coursera. I have just discovered this source and I have been taking their English lessons since morning. Now, I could see results, I am confident with a pronunciation of some difficult and complex words. My English tutor gave its’ web address in our last lesson. I’ve not understood why my teacher gave me the link only on the last session before starting to scan it. There are huge materials for the learning English, with dividing into four general parts. Also, you could send your writing tasks to evaluating by and receiving of feedback from tutors and other students. I found it very useful and the motivating site, where you easily get the information about the experiences of others in the comments. I would appreciate if you could find this site on the same way as I found. Please do not hesitate to contact with me in case of questions, With warm wishes, Siu Dear Max, I would like to share with you a website for improving of your English, it is named Coursera. I have just discovered this source and I have been taking their English lessons since morning. Now, I could see results, I am confident with a pronunciation of some difficult and complex words. My English tutor gave its’ web address in our last lesson. I’ve not understood why my teacher gave me the link only on the last session before starting to scan it. There are huge materials for the learning English, with dividing into four general parts. Also, you could send your writing tasks to evaluating by and receiving of feedback from tutors and other students. I found it very useful and the motivating site, where you easily get the information about the experiences of others in the comments. I would appreciate if you could find this site on the same way as I found. Please do not hesitate to contact with me in case of questions, With warm wishes, Siu
Dear Max,

I would like to share with you a website for improving of your English, it
is named
Coursera. I have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
discovered this source and I have been taking their English
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lessons
since morning.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
, I could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
results, I am confident with a pronunciation of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
difficult and complex words.

My English
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tutor
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gave
An apostrophe is never used to form possessive case pronouns. Did you mean: "its"?
its’
web address in our last
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lesson
. I’ve not understood why my teacher
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gave
me the link
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
on the last session
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
starting to scan it. There are huge materials for the learning English, with dividing into four general parts.
Also
, you could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
your writing tasks to evaluating by and receiving of feedback from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tutors
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
students. I found it
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
useful and the motivating
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
site
, where you
easily
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the information about the experiences of others in the comments.

I would appreciate if you could find this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
site
on the same way as I found.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
do not hesitate to contact with me in case of questions,

With warm wishes,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Siu


Dear Max,

I would like to share with you a website for improving of your English, it
is named
Coursera. I have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
discovered this source and I have been taking their English
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lessons
since morning.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
, I could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
results, I am confident with a pronunciation of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
difficult and complex words.

My English
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tutor
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gave
An apostrophe is never used to form possessive case pronouns. Did you mean: "its"?
its’
web address in our last
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lesson
. I’ve not understood why my teacher
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gave
me the link
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
on the last session
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
starting to scan it. There are huge materials for the learning English, with dividing into four general parts.
Also
, you could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
your writing tasks to evaluating by and receiving of feedback from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tutors
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
students. I found it
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
useful and the motivating
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
site
, where you
easily
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the information about the experiences of others in the comments.

I would appreciate if you could find this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
site
on the same way as I found.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
do not hesitate to contact with me in case of questions,

With warm wishes,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Siu

IELTS letter You have found an interesting website. Tell about the website to your friend. Tell the friend, how this website will help in education

Letter
  American English
13 paragraphs
343 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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