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Write a letter to a friends who wants to visit your city.

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Hello Chris, it is great to hear such good news from you. I'm also glad that you intend to visit my city. There are plenty of things which you can do in Kutná Hora. I don't know whether or not you have been briefed on our city enough but we are one of those UNESCO cities in the Czech Republic. As far as I'm concerned, I would strongly recommend visiting one of the local vineyards if you are fond of wine. On the other hand, if you prefer doing some sports activities where there is no chance of winding down, you can visit our local amusement park. Moreover, our councillors have recently built up a new swimming pool which is fabulous and has been becoming increasingly more popular during the past few months. Another thing which cannot be omitted is sightseeing. My city is famous for the Italian court and the Ossuary. Our local guides will provide you with the basics in terms of their history. If I were you, I would definitely go for this option, since it will prevent you from going astray. To sum up, there are some things which you can do in our city. We are surrounded by picturesque scenery which enables you to soak up the atmosphere of our historical city. Just one tip at the end. Don't forget to take an umbrella and some comfortable clothes. Do drop me a line if you have time. Best wishes, MS
Hello Chris, it is great to hear such
good
news from you. I'm
also
glad that you intend to visit my city. There are
plenty
of things which you can do in
Kutná
Hora. I don't know
whether or not
you have
been briefed
on our city
enough
but
we are one of those UNESCO
cities
in the Czech Republic.

As far as I'm concerned, I would
strongly
recommend visiting one of the local vineyards if you are fond of wine.
On the other hand
, if you prefer doing
some
sports activities where there is no chance of winding down, you can visit our local amusement park.
Moreover
, our councillors have recently built up a new swimming pool which is fabulous and has been becoming
increasingly
more popular during the past few months.

Another thing which cannot
be omitted
is sightseeing. My city is
famous
for the Italian court and the
Ossuary
. Our local guides will provide you with the basics in terms of their history. If I were you, I would definitely go for this option, since it will
prevent
you from going astray.

To sum up, there are
some
things which you can do in our city. We
are surrounded
by picturesque scenery which enables you to soak up the atmosphere of our historical city.
Just
one tip at the
end
. Don't forget to take an umbrella and
some
comfortable clothes.

Do drop me a line if you have time.

Best wishes, MS

IELTS letter Write a letter to a friends who wants to visit your city.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
244 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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