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Your friend, chris, has invited you to a special party which he is organising for your college teacher. Write an email to Chris.

Your friend, chris, has invited you to a special party which he is organising for your college teacher. Write an email to Chris. bDyPQ
Dear Chris, How are things? I hope you are doing well. Thank for your letter. I am writing to answer the question given in the previous one. After careful consideration i have suggested that you should explain about successful sportperson. The reason why i choose successful sportperson since music in my country doesn't too fascinated, and personally I a big fan of international music. For other, Vietnam's sport is known as a dark horse. In my opinion, you should say who he or she is, why he or she famous, why you discuss him or her and choose them for the presentation. I don't know who you admire but I can recommend you the successful sportperson in my country is Nguyen Thi Anh Vien. She is a female athlete of the national swimming team of Vietnam. She has achieved the great of medals and set new remarkable records. In 2015, she was the youngest army captain in Vietnam and was awarded the second-class Labor Medals. I think you should discovered more information about her if you interested. That's my own personal view. You can research other person, whatever; who they are, I sure that they would be the great person whom you can give them into your presentation. Break a leg! I look forwards to see you soon. Please respond me at your earliest convenience. Best wishes, fjbfri
Dear Chris,

How are things? I hope you are doing well. Thank for your letter.

I am writing to answer the question
given
in the previous one.

After
careful consideration
i
have suggested that you should
explain
about successful
sportperson
. The reason why
i
choose successful
sportperson
since music in my country doesn't too
fascinated
, and
personally
I
a
big
fan of international music. For other, Vietnam's sport
is known
as a dark horse. In my opinion, you should say who he or she is, why he or
she
famous
, why you discuss him or her and choose them for the presentation.

I don't know who you admire
but
I can recommend you the successful
sportperson
in my country is Nguyen
Thi
Anh
Vien
. She is a female athlete of the national swimming team of Vietnam. She has achieved the great of medals and set new remarkable records. In 2015, she was the youngest army captain in Vietnam and
was awarded
the second-
class
Labor Medals. I
think
you should
discovered
more information about her if you interested. That's my
own
personal view. You can research other person, whatever; who they are, I sure that they would be the great person whom you can give them into your presentation. Break a leg!

I look forwards to
see
you
soon
.
Please
respond me at your earliest convenience.

Best wishes,

fjbfri
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IELTS letter Your friend, chris, has invited you to a special party which he is organising for your college teacher. Write an email to Chris.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
227 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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