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You recently heard that library is to be closed and a shopping center is to be build, you have to tell from where you heard the news, why shopping complex should not be build, why library should not be closed.

You recently heard that library is to be closed and a shopping center is to be build, you have to tell from where you heard the news, why shopping complex should not be build, why library should not be closed. pJBym
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a resident of Crossing Republic. I read in the local news paper that administration has decided to close the library from next month and will construct numerous shops in place of that. I would like to highlight that there are several shopping markets already available in the vicinity. Moreover, this place is already crowded hence one more shopping area will increase the chaos here. On the other hand, the library is a historical building of this city. Our township is famous due to this heritage. Furthermore, this is the common gathering point for lot of senior citizens of our socity. They meet there and chat for long time during the day. There are a lot of nice books available for all generations like it has the famous novels "Harry Potter" due to that children are also attracted to the library and developed the habbit of reading. This all will be vanished out with the closure of such wonderfull premises. I request you to reconsider the decision taken by the authorities so that we can save the beautiful monument in our township. Yours faithfully, Nitin Singhal
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a resident of Crossing Republic. I read in the local
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news paper
that administration has decided to close the library from
next
month and will construct numerous shops in place of that.
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I
would like to highlight that there are several shopping markets already available in the vicinity.
Moreover
, this place is already crowded
hence
one more shopping area will increase the chaos here.

On the other hand
, the library is a historical building of this city. Our township is
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famous
due to this heritage.
Furthermore
, this is the common gathering point for
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lot of
senior citizens of our
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socity
. They
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meet
there and chat for long time during the day. There are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
nice books available for all generations like it has the
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famous
novels
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"
Harry Potter
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due to that children are
also
attracted to the library and developed the
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habbit
of reading. This all will
be vanished
out with the closure of such
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wonderfull
premises.

I request you to reconsider the decision taken by the authorities
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so
that we can save the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
monument in our township.

Yours
faithfully
,

Nitin
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Singhal

IELTS letter You recently heard that library is to be closed and a shopping center is to be build, you have to tell from where you heard the news, why shopping complex should not be build, why library should not be closed.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
190 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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