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planning to sell my bicycle

planning to sell my bicycle 66jn8

Dear Hussain, I hope you are doing well. It has been long time since we have a discussion. I am writing this letter to let you know that I am planning to sell my bicycle. I believe you might be interested to buy my one since your bicycle has been stolen. As you know I’ve got a new job and i need to leave the country soon, so i assume that selling it is better than leaving it in the store. It has a sport style and i just recently repaint it. I have chosen a mix between red and white color. I have also replaced the seat with black leather one which is more comfortable, flexible and easy to use. Guess what? next Friday is my brother Birthday and for sure you are invited for the celebration, so you can try the bicycle and view it. Keep in touch Best regards Rami

Dear Hussain,

I hope you are doing well.

It has been long time since we have a discussion. I am writing this letter to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 you know that I am planning to sell my bicycle. I believe you might be interested
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 my one since your bicycle has been stolen
.

As you know I’ve This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 a new job and Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 need to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 the country This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 assume that selling it is better than leaving it in the store.

It has a sport style and i This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 recently repaint it. I have chosen a mix between red and white color. I have also
 replaced the seat with black leather one which is more comfortable, flexible and easy to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
.

Guess what? This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterNext
next
 Friday is my brother Birthday and for sure you are invited
 for the celebration, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 you can try the bicycle and view it.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
Keep
 in touch

Best regards

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