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You want to stay a two week hoiday in your friend's region. Write a letter asking for informatio and advice

You want to stay a two week hoiday in your friend's region. Write a letter asking for informatio and advice ENY2B

Dear Adriatic, I am writing to ask if you could help me with spending my two week holiday in your region. I am interested in your place so much. They say, this place is so quiet and it has wonderful view. Therefore, I decided to spend my vocation there. Could you give me some information where could I stay and how to get to there? I hope, there are many sightseeing places and it would be satisfy me. The most essential to me is to see ancient buildings that I had heard before. I want to take photos more adorable and attractive places. Because it would be important source for my research about historical buildings in our country. Could you possible offer your advise to reply my questions? What is the weather in this area? What kind of clothes could I take? Clearly, I do not know what things have to take too. I need your advice. It would be great help if you write me as soon as possible. I look forward to receiving your advice. Yours sincerely, Mina RAY

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see
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possible
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advise
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, I do not know what things This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
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