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participate in the seminar as per the advertisement which your

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Dear Sir, I would like to participate in the seminar as per the advertisement which your company had posted in the website career opportunities. Com regarding the management related program at Italy. As a Human Resource Manager I hope that this would be beneficial for my future. Let me ask some clarifications that, only brief information had given in the newspaper consequently when and where this event will be conducting? Additionally, it would be beneficial if you will provide an agenda of this program for arranging my flight. Lastly, for your information that I have been living in Kuwait. Therefore, I need a fully furnished nearby accommodation for attending the seminar. Regarding the expenses, please share the available flats pictures along with payment link for easy payment. I hope that this event would be successful because some of my colleagues were attended this program two months before and I collected feedback as positive review of happiness. Expecting a prompt action from your side. Best Regards Sony.

Dear Sir,

I would like to participate in the seminar as per the advertisement which your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 had posted in the website career opportunities. Com regarding the management related program at Italy. As a Human Resource Manager I hope that this would be beneficial for my future.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me ask This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 clarifications that, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 brief information had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 in the newspaper consequently
 when and where this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 will be conducting? Additionally
, it would be beneficial if you will provide an agenda of this program for arranging my flight. Lastly
, for your information that I have been living in Kuwait. Therefore
, I need a fully
 furnished nearby accommodation for attending the seminar. Regarding the expenses, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 share the available flats pictures along with payment link for easy payment.

I hope that this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 would be successful This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 of my colleagues were attended
 this program two months This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 and I collected feedback as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 review of happiness.

Expecting a prompt action from your side.

Best Regards

Sony. 

IELTS letter participate in the seminar as per the advertisement which your

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

166 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 7.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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