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participate in the seminar as per the advertisement which your

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Dear Sir, I would like to participate in the seminar as per the advertisement which your company had posted in the website career opportunities. Com regarding the management related program at Italy. As a Human Resource Manager I hope that this would be beneficial for my future. Let me ask some clarifications that, only brief information had given in the newspaper consequently when and where this event will be conducting? Additionally, it would be beneficial if you will provide an agenda of this program for arranging my flight. Lastly, for your information that I have been living in Kuwait. Therefore, I need a fully furnished nearby accommodation for attending the seminar. Regarding the expenses, please share the available flats pictures along with payment link for easy payment. I hope that this event would be successful because some of my colleagues were attended this program two months before and I collected feedback as positive review of happiness. Expecting a prompt action from your side. Best Regards Sony.
Dear Sir,

I would like to participate in the seminar as per the advertisement which your
company
had posted in the website career opportunities. Com regarding the management related program at Italy. As a Human Resource Manager I hope that this would be beneficial for my future.

Let
me ask
some
clarifications that,
only
brief information had
given
in the newspaper
consequently
when and where this
event
will be conducting?
Additionally
, it would be beneficial if you will provide an agenda of this program for arranging my flight.
Lastly
, for your information that I have been living in Kuwait.
Therefore
, I need a
fully
furnished nearby accommodation for attending the seminar. Regarding the expenses,
please
share the available flats pictures along with payment link for easy payment.

I hope that this
event
would be successful
because
some
of my colleagues
were attended
this program two months
before
and I collected feedback as
positive
review of happiness.

Expecting a prompt action from your side.

Best Regards

Sony.
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6.5
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