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construction work which is taking place in the street

construction work which is taking place in the street aAPWY
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter with regard to the construction work which is taking place in the street very near to my house. Let me introduce my self my name is Rami i am a PHD student in the last year i am studying computer information systems. Since two weeks a maintenance work has been started near my house and the workers keep working till late night every day. As i mentioned I am a student and we are now in exam season, so we need to study hard and i can not due to the machines and vehicles noise. I would be grateful if the duty timing for the workers can be changed and to work only in the day time so at least we can study in the evening. I hope you will address these concerns as soon as possible Yours faithfully Rami Ziadat
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter with regard to the construction work which is taking place in the street
very
near to my
house
.

Let
me introduce my self my name is
Rami
i
am a
PHD
student in the last year
i
am studying computer information systems.

Since two weeks a maintenance work has been
started
near my
house
and the workers
keep
working till late night every day.

As
i
mentioned I am a
student and
we are
now
in exam season,
so
we need to study
hard
and
i
can not due to the machines and vehicles noise.

I would be grateful if the duty timing for the workers can be
changed
and to work
only
in the day time
so
at least we can study in the evening.

I hope you will address these concerns as
soon
as possible

Yours
faithfully


Rami
Ziadat
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IELTS letter construction work which is taking place in the street

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  American English
9 paragraphs
147 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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