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In my complaint letter about Hotel

In my complaint letter about Hotel 1njOA
Namangan Mingbulak July 31. 07. 2021 lucy Brown Hotel Subject. The price and uncomfortable Dear Sir. The day before yesterday, I visided your hotel on countryside and was really disappointed with the peculiarity of place that was subserve to me. I was appalled at the unsatisfactory accomodation your place very shining. If you would like any information about the city or anything else, please contact me. I will be pleased to help you. Congratulations. I am very glad that you were successful in the competition and that you will come to England to study. I have not been able to write for a long time. I was doing me exams. Thank goodness they are over. I am looking forward to seeing you soon. Yours faithfully. Malifisenta
Namangan
Mingbulak


July 31. 07. 2021

lucy
Brown

Hotel

Subject. The price and
uncomfortable


Dear Sir.

The day
before
yesterday, I
visided
your hotel on countryside and was
really
disappointed with the peculiarity of place that was
subserve
to me. I
was appalled
at the unsatisfactory
accomodation
your place
very
shining. If you
would like
any information about the city or anything else,
please
contact me. I will be
pleased
to
help
you. Congratulations. I am
very
glad that you were successful in the competition and that you will
come
to England to study.
I
have not been able to write for a long time.
I
was doing me exams. Thank goodness they are over. I am looking forward to seeing you
soon
.

Yours
faithfully
.

Malifisenta
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IELTS letter In my complaint letter about Hotel

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  American English
9 paragraphs
125 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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