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Your former homestay family is coming to see you in your home country and stay from January 31st to February 10th. v. 4

Dear Mr Shawn, I must tell you how excited I really am after learning the news that you will be visiting my country from the 31st of January to February the 10th. In fact, right after reading your letter, I started to check the information on all the great hotels of my country in case if you are not too sure where to stay or what kind of hotels to choose. Anyway, it seems like I haven’t seen you in ages, and so I don’t really like to waste any time to meet you as soon as you come to the airport. Just let me know the exact time when you would arrive at the airport, and pick you up from there. But, if you don’t want me to see you at the airport, I can meet you at the famous “Cherry Shopping Mall” in our capital city on 10th of January at around 5: 00 pm. By the way, I have already made some plans to take part in some activities, such as visiting the largest botanical garden of my country as well as enjoying the complete view of our capital city at night from the tallest tower. Have a safe flight. See you soon. Yours sincerely, Chris Reid

IELTS letter Your former homestay family is coming to see you in your home country and stay from January 31st to February 10th. v.4

Dear Mr Shawn, I
must
tell
you how excited I
really
am after learning the news that you will be visiting my country from the 31st of January to February the 10th. In fact, right after reading your letter, I
started
to
check
the information on all the great hotels of my country in case if you are not
too sure
where to stay or what kind of hotels to choose. Anyway, it seems like I haven’t
seen
you in ages, and
so
I don’t
really
like to waste any time to
meet
you as
soon
as you
come
to the airport.
Just
let
me know the exact time when you would arrive at the airport, and pick you up from there.
But
, if you don’t want me to
see
you at the airport, I can
meet
you at the
famous
“Cherry Shopping Mall” in our capital city on 10th of January at around 5: 00 pm. By the way, I have already made
some
plans to
take part
in
some
activities, such as visiting the largest botanical garden of my country
as well
as enjoying the complete view of our capital city at night from the tallest tower. Have a safe flight.
See
you
soon
. Yours
sincerely
, Chris Reid
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
Letter
7 paragraphs
209 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Band score ≥ 7
  • Band score ≤ 6
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