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Your former homestay family is coming to see you in your home country and stay from January 31st to February 10th. v.3

Your former homestay family is coming to see you in your home country and stay from January 31st to February 10th. v. 3
Dear Mr & Mrs Johnson, I trust you are doing fine and enjoying the season. I am surprised to hear that you are visiting the United Kingdom in a few days and I am really happy about it. I am sure you will enjoy your holiday here and the climate at this time of the year is bright and sunny. I cannot wait to meet you. As you have already said, you are going to stay in a hotel in London. My house is almost 10 hours driveway from London city centre. I hope you will be free on February 4th so that we can meet on that day. When you come to Belfast, give me a ring or send me an SMS two hours prior so that I can meet you there. Early morning (around 9: 00 am) would be better but I can meet you anytime you want. We will have our lunch together in a restaurant where I went many times and I quite like their environment and food. There are many tourist spots in Belfast so I am sure you both will enjoy your time. I will be very glad if you agree to stay at our home for a couple of days as my parents are very eager to meet you. I have told them about you and they are expecting you. During your stay at our home, we can go to see popular historical museums, beaches, amusement parks and other attractive places near my hometown. We would love to give you a taste of our traditional food. Looking forward to seeing you both soon. Sincerely yours, Sonia Vincent
Dear Mr & Mrs Johnson,

I trust you are doing fine and enjoying the season. I
am surprised
to hear that you are visiting the United Kingdom in a few
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
days and
I am
really
happy about it.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am sure you will enjoy your holiday here and the climate at this time of the year is bright and sunny.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
cannot wait to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you.

As you have already said, you are going to stay in a hotel in London. My
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
is almost 10 hours driveway from London city
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.
centre
. I hope you will be free on February 4th
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so
that we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
on that day. When you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to Belfast, give me a ring or
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
me an SMS two hours prior
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so
that I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you there. Early morning (around 9: 00 am) would be better
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but
I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you anytime you want. We will have our lunch together in a restaurant where I went
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many
times and I quite like their environment and food.

There are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
tourist spots in Belfast
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I am sure you both will enjoy your time. I will be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
glad if you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
to stay at our home for a couple of days as my parents are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
eager to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you. I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
them about you and they are expecting you. During your stay at our home, we can go to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
popular historical museums, beaches, amusement parks and other attractive places near my hometown. We would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to give you a taste of our traditional food.

Looking forward to seeing you both
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Sincerely
yours,

Sonia Vincent
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS letter Your former homestay family is coming to see you in your home country and stay from January 31st to February 10th. v. 3

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
273 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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