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Your family is going to move to another town. Write a letter to the Principal of a local school asking if they will accept your son. Describe his academic achievements and scope of interests.

Your family is going to move to another town. Write a letter to the Principal of a local school asking if they will accept your son. Describe his academic achievements and scope of interests. n6RGe
DEAR MR. X I AM WRITING TO YOU ABOUT ADMISSION OF SON IN CLASS 6 AT YOUR ESTEEMED INSTITUTION. DUE TO WORK COMMITMENT I ALONG WITH MY WHOLE FAMILY WILL BE MOVING TO DHAKA DISTRICT BY NEXT WEEK. MY SON IS NOW STUDYING AT XAVIER HIGH SCHOOL, CHITTAGONG. I KNOW IT IS VERY DIFFICULT TO GET ADMITTED AT A SCHOOL IN THE MIDDLE OF THE YEAR. MY SON HAS ACHIEVED GREAT ACADEMIC RESULTS SO FAR. HE WAS A DISTRICT SCHOLARSHIP WINNER BASED ON HIS FINAL CLASS FIVE RESULT. HE SCORED MORE THAN 91% IN ALL OF THE SUBJECTS. FURTHERMORE, HE HAS RECEIVED PRIZE FOR CONSECUTIVE THREE TIMES AT CHILD PAINTING COMPETITION ORGANIZED BY CHATTAGRAM DISTRICT KOCHI KACHAR MELA. HE ALSO HAS INTEREST IN PLAYING IN FOOTBALL. TAKING MY SON'S ACADEMIC ACHIEVEMENTS AND VARIOUS EXTRA CURRICULER INTEREST PLEASE COSIDER HIS ADMISSION TO YOUR SCHOOL. IF YOU HAVE ANY FURTHER QUESTIONS, PLEASE CONTACT ME. YOURS FAITHFULLY.
DEAR MR. X

I AM WRITING TO YOU ABOUT ADMISSION OF SON IN
CLASS
6 AT YOUR ESTEEMED INSTITUTION. DUE TO WORK COMMITMENT I ALONG WITH MY WHOLE FAMILY WILL BE MOVING TO DHAKA DISTRICT BY
NEXT
WEEK. MY SON IS
NOW
STUDYING AT XAVIER HIGH SCHOOL, CHITTAGONG. I KNOW IT IS
VERY
DIFFICULT TO
GET
ADMITTED AT A SCHOOL IN THE MIDDLE OF THE YEAR.

MY SON HAS ACHIEVED GREAT ACADEMIC RESULTS
SO
FAR. HE WAS A DISTRICT SCHOLARSHIP WINNER BASED ON HIS FINAL
CLASS
FIVE RESULT. HE SCORED MORE THAN 91% IN
ALL OF THE
SUBJECTS.
FURTHERMORE
, HE HAS RECEIVED PRIZE FOR CONSECUTIVE THREE TIMES AT CHILD PAINTING COMPETITION ORGANIZED BY
CHATTAGRAM
DISTRICT
KOCHI
KACHAR
MELA
. HE
ALSO
HAS INTEREST IN PLAYING IN FOOTBALL.

TAKING MY SON'S ACADEMIC ACHIEVEMENTS AND VARIOUS EXTRA
CURRICULER
INTEREST
PLEASE
COSIDER
HIS ADMISSION TO YOUR SCHOOL.

IF YOU HAVE ANY
FURTHER
QUESTIONS,
PLEASE
CONTACT ME.

YOURS
FAITHFULLY
.
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IELTS letter Your family is going to move to another town. Write a letter to the Principal of a local school asking if they will accept your son. Describe his academic achievements and scope of interests.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
154 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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