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You are going on a short training course at a collage in Greenmount, Northern Ireland. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter, explain your situation describe the accommodation you require say when you will need it

You are going on a short training course at a collage in Greenmount, Northern Ireland. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter, explain your situation describe the accommodation you require say when you will need it KwnDN
DEAR SIR I WOULD LIKE TO TAKE 15 WORK-DAYS OFF DURING FIRST HALF OF APRIL 2021 FOR TAKING FINAL PREPARATION OF CIMA FINAL LEVEL EXAMINATION. AS YOU KNOW MY WORK MOSTLY CONSISTS OF MONTHLY MANAGEMENT INFORMATION SYSTEM (MIS) REPORT PREPARATION, MONTHLY CLOSING OF VARIOUS ACCOUNTS REPORTS, PROJECTS PROGRESS REPORTS. SINCE MOST MY WORK IS RELATED TO REPORT PREPARATION WHICH TAKE PLACE IN THE END OF THE MONTH, THEREFORE, TAKING LEAVE IN THE BEGINING OF THE MONTH WILL NOT HAMPER VARIOUS REPORTS SUBMISSION. MOREOVER, I TALKED TO MR. Y REGARDING FILL-UP TASKS DURING MY LEAVE AND HE SAID HE WILL DO NEEDFUL. FURTHERMORE, I WILL BE IN TOUCH THROUGH INTERNET WITH THE OFFICE. EARNING CIMA QUALIFICATION WILL ENABLE ME TO ASSESS COMPANY FINANCIAL MATTERS MORE PRUDENTLY. I WILL BE ABLE TO GIVE STRATEGIC DECISIONS ON COMPANY'S OVERALL PERFORMANCE. MOREOVER, JOINING THIS PRESTIJIOUS ORGANIZATION WILL HELP ME LINK WITH OTHER FINANCE PROFESSIONALS. I LOOK FORWARD TO HEARING FROM YOU. YOURS FAITHFULLY
DEAR SIR

I WOULD LIKE TO TAKE 15 WORK-DAYS OFF DURING
FIRST
HALF OF APRIL 2021 FOR TAKING FINAL PREPARATION OF
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CIMA
FINAL LEVEL EXAMINATION.

AS YOU KNOW MY WORK
MOSTLY
CONSISTS OF MONTHLY MANAGEMENT INFORMATION SYSTEM (MIS)
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REPORT
PREPARATION, MONTHLY CLOSING OF VARIOUS ACCOUNTS
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REPORTS
, PROJECTS PROGRESS
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REPORTS
. SINCE MOST MY WORK
IS RELATED
TO
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REPORT
PREPARATION WHICH TAKE PLACE IN THE
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END
OF THE MONTH,
THEREFORE
, TAKING
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LEAVE
IN THE
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BEGINING
OF THE MONTH WILL NOT HAMPER VARIOUS
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REPORTS
SUBMISSION.
MOREOVER
, I TALKED TO MR. Y REGARDING FILL-UP TASKS DURING MY
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
LEAVE
AND HE SAID HE WILL DO NEEDFUL.
FURTHERMORE
, I WILL BE IN TOUCH THROUGH INTERNET WITH THE OFFICE.

EARNING
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CIMA
QUALIFICATION WILL ENABLE ME TO ASSESS
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COMPANY
FINANCIAL MATTERS MORE
PRUDENTLY
. I WILL BE ABLE TO GIVE STRATEGIC DECISIONS ON
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COMPANY
'S
OVERALL
PERFORMANCE.
MOREOVER
, JOINING THIS
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PRESTIJIOUS
ORGANIZATION WILL
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HELP
ME LINK WITH OTHER FINANCE PROFESSIONALS.

I LOOK FORWARD TO HEARING FROM YOU.

YOURS
FAITHFULLY
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IELTS letter You are going on a short training course at a collage in Greenmount, Northern Ireland. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter, explain your situation describe the accommodation you require say when you will need it

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  American English
6 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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