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A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • suggest an interesting part of the city to live in • describe the public transport in your city • say how your friend can meet new people there

A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • suggest an interesting part of the city to live in • describe the public transport in your city • say how your friend can meet new people there 3aA6w
Dear Nav, It was great to get your postcard and I’m thrilled to hear that you are coming to Kurukshetra for the job. As you know I’m leaving here for more than 20 years and that’s why i know each and every thing of this city. Because, you want to work in IT sector, and so the sector-8 would be best. Moreover, this place is considered extremely neat and clean without any kind of pollution. Also, it’s not far away from my house. The Kurukshetra city is fully approachable with all sorts of tranportation, a number of buses and trains run daily even you can come directly here via plane. In addition to it, taxis are available at each part of the city and therefore, it would be easy for you as you haven’t personal vehicle. This city is related to religion and lots of temples are there due to which hundreds of people visit here every day. You can get a chance to meet peoples of different cultures and places there as they are touristic places. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully Dr. Dilbag singh
Dear
Nav
,

It was great to
get
your postcard and I’m thrilled to hear that you are coming to
Kurukshetra
for the job.

As you know I’m leaving here for more than 20 years and that’s why
i
know each and every thing of this city.
Because
, you want to work in IT sector, and
so
the sector-8 would be best.
Moreover
, this place
is considered
extremely
neat and clean without any kind of pollution.
Also
, it’s not far away from my
house
.

The
Kurukshetra
city is
fully
approachable with all sorts of
tranportation
, a number of buses and trains run daily even you can
come
directly
here via
plane
.
In addition
to it, taxis are available at each part of the city and
therefore
, it would be easy for you as you haven’t personal vehicle.

This city
is related
to religion and lots of temples are there due to which hundreds of
people
visit here every day. You can
get
a chance to
meet
peoples of
different
cultures and places there as they are touristic places.

I look forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Yours
faithfully


Dr.
Dilbag
singh
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IELTS letter A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • suggest an interesting part of the city to live in • describe the public transport in your city • say how your friend can meet new people there

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
189 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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