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You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You have decided to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter: • introduce yourself • explain what experience and special skills you have • explain why you are interested in the job

You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You have decided to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter: • introduce yourself • explain what experience and special skills you have • explain why you are interested in the job 3aAjw

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to apply for the part-time job in your museum shop during the holiday. I am very keen to have a part-time job during this summer vacation, specifically in a shop where I would be able to learn and meet new people from diverse backgrounds. I am hoping that you would consider my application and give me the chance to work for you. I am teacher in an elementary grammar school, and I teach History. I am 26 years old and have completed my graduation from arts major. I can speak English and Tamil fluently. Last year, I worked in a book shop during my vacation and enjoyed it very much. I would like to meet new people and serve my position in dedication, commitment and hard work. I enjoyed going to your museum a few months ago and I Spent considerable amount of time there. I visited your museum shop with a team, and I am familiar with the types of items your store sell to visitors. I think you will be kind enough to consider me as suitable candidate for the position. I look forward to hearing from you, Yours sincerely, Nancy

Dear Sir/Madam,

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shop
 during the holiday. I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 keen to have a part-time job during this summer vacation, specifically
 in a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 where I would be able to learn and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 from diverse backgrounds. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am hoping that you would consider my application and give me the chance to work for you.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am teacher in an elementary grammar school, and I teach History. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am 26 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 and have completed my graduation from arts major. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 can speak English and Tamil fluently
. Last year, I worked in a book You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 during my vacation and enjoyed it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 much. I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 and serve my position in dedication, commitment and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 work.

I enjoyed going to your museum a few months ago and I Spent considerable amount of time there. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 visited your museum You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 with a team, and I am familiar with the types of items your store sell to visitors. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 you will be kind This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 to consider me as suitable candidate for the position.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 look forward to hearing from you,

Yours sincerely
,

Nancy