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You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his/her performance give details of your music-related activities explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities

You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his/her performance give details of your music-related activities explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities JolPw
Dear Posty, Hi my name is Saarthi, your die heart fan. I just attended your concert Hollywood bleeding in Ireland. I must say what a thrilling experience it was. I literally felt goosebumps when you sung sunflower from Spiderman verse album. Me and my fellow colleagues just started smashing the ground same as you on the stage. We pretended like you holding beer in one hand and cigar on other and enjoyed the trance of your vocals. I bumped into one of your fellow rap singer at backstage when the concert was over and asked him for autograph. Actually, I work as an event manager if you would like to make your concert with more flashy lightings and effects with screens, mist and smoke. I think so you would be able to energize more with your fusion of rustic and rock voice. In addition to that our company also provide disco jockey and we are proud partner with dolby atmos and hikiens bear supply company (one you did advertisement will act as signature of you), so you need to while away on stage with magical singing. Yours faithfully, Saarthi
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Hi my name is
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Saarthi
, your
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heart fan. I
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attended your concert Hollywood bleeding in Ireland. I
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say what a thrilling experience it was.
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felt goosebumps when you sung sunflower from
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Spiderman
verse album. Me and my
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fellow colleagues
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started
smashing the ground same as you on the stage. We pretended like you holding beer in one hand and cigar on other and enjoyed the trance of your vocals.

I bumped into one of your fellow rap singer at backstage when the concert was over and asked him for autograph. Actually, I work as an
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event
manager if you would like to
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make
your concert with more flashy
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lightings
and effects with screens, mist and smoke. I
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think
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you would be able to energize more with your fusion of rustic and rock voice.
In addition
to that our
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company
also
provide disco
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jockey and
we are proud partner with
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dolby
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atmos
and
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hikiens
bear supply
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(one you did advertisement will act as signature of you),
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you need to while away on stage with magical singing.

Yours
faithfully
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IELTS letter You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his/her performance give details of your music-related activities explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities

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5.5
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