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Write a letter to the couple. In your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Write a letter to the couple. In your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job You do NOT need to write any addresses. e5eNG
Dear Mr, Mrs Smith, I am writing this letter i n regards to your advertisement publish in daily newspaper last week. As you have mentioned in the advertisement that you need a tutor for you children to teach German language; i would like to apply for this position. My native place is Germany and my first language is also German though i am fluent in English. As i have done masters in German and English from stanfurd univercityand i have been teaching German in Australia for 11 years now. That is why I think I will be the best candidate for this job. Also i will be able to earn some extra stable income. Hoping to receive positive response from you, thanking you in advance. your sincearly, Edwerd Jones
Dear Mr, Mrs Smith, I am writing this letter i n regards to your advertisement publish in daily newspaper
‘last week’ indicates a finished event of the past. Please check the predicate's tense.
last week
. As you have mentioned in the advertisement that you need a tutor for you children to teach German language;
Did you mean "I"?
i
would like to apply for this position. My native place is Germany and my
first
language is
also
German though
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am fluent in English. As
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
have done masters in German and English from
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stanfurd
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univercityand
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
have been teaching German in Australia for 11 years
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
.
That is
why I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
I will be the best candidate for this job.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Also
Did you mean "I"?
i
will be able to earn
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some
extra stable income. Hoping to receive
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
response from you, thanking you in advance.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
your
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sincearly
,
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Edwerd
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Jones

IELTS letter Write a letter to the couple. In your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
128 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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