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Your English –speaking friend, Sam, is an art student and has written to you with a request. Read Sam’s email and the notes you have made. Then write an email to Sam, using all your notes.

Your English –speaking friend, Sam, is an art student and has written to you with a request. Read Sam’s email and the notes you have made. Then write an email to Sam, using all your notes. 7rKYA
Hello Sam Of course, you can come and paint me. Do you know that I extremely interested in art, especially portraits and I’ll be glad to help? I have a nice balcony in the back of my house, which I think would be suitable. As you know, I live near the sea. It’s airy has a wonderful view of the beach and the fields near the sea. Also, it has colorful lights switched on at night. I suggest you include in the picture my beach umbrella. It’s not valuable at all, but it means a lot to me as was given by my grandad, and it’s the most important thing for me. You may not find it beautiful, but the material of what it’s made out of is very quality silk. Everything’s pretty clear, just do I have to be dressed in any particular way, for the picture? Let me know when you’re exactly coming too. Reply soon, Kate.
Hello Sam

Of course
, you can
come
and paint me. Do you know that I
extremely
interested in art,
especially
portraits and I’ll be glad to
help
?

I have a nice balcony in the back of my
house
, which I
think
would be suitable. As you know, I
live
near the sea. It’s airy has a wonderful view of the beach and the fields near the sea.
Also
, it has colorful lights switched on at night. I suggest you include in the picture my beach umbrella. It’s not valuable at all,
but
it means a lot to me as was
given
by my grandad, and it’s the most
important
thing for me. You may not find it
beautiful
,
but
the material of what it’s made out of is
very
quality silk.

Everything’s pretty
clear
,
just
do I
have to
be dressed
in any particular way, for the picture?

Let
me know when you’re exactly coming too.

Reply
soon
, Kate.
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IELTS letter Your English –speaking friend, Sam, is an art student and has written to you with a request. Read Sam’s email and the notes you have made. Then write an email to Sam, using all your notes.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
159 words
7.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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