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Complain to bank on missing debit card from the kit received from bank.

Complain to bank on missing debit card from the kit received from bank. pLMB9
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in connection with my debit card of newly opened account in your bank last week. I received the letter and kit from the bank but the card was missing in it. Further, the kit was torn from one side and I am afraid it may went into the wrong hands. I am concerned about it because yesterday I deposited money in my account and my phone number has not yet linked with it. So, I don't know whether my money is safe or not and even if it get withdrawn by wrong means by using the card I won't be able to know about it. Thus, I am requesting you to do me a favor by blocking my account for some time till I get my new debit card and my phone number get linked. I even registered a complaint with the courier service and they assured me to look after over this matter on priority basis. So, kindly process my request immediately and if you want any additional information do let me know I will provide it. Looking forward to hear from you. Yours faithfullyHarry
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in connection with my debit
card
of
newly
opened account in your bank last week. I received the letter and kit from the bank
but
the
card
was missing in it.
Further
, the kit
was torn
from one
side and
I am afraid it may
went
into the
wrong
hands. I
am concerned
about it
because
yesterday I deposited money in my account and my phone number has not
yet
linked with it.
So
, I don't know whether my money is safe or not and even if it
get
withdrawn by
wrong
means by using the
card
I won't be able to know about it.
Thus
, I am requesting you to do me a favor by blocking my account for
some
time till I
get
my new debit
card
and my phone number
get
linked. I even registered a complaint with the courier
service and
they assured me to look after over this matter on priority basis.
So
, kindly process my request immediately and if you want any additional information do
let
me know I will provide it. Looking forward
to hear
from you. Yours
faithfullyHarry
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IELTS letter Complain to bank on missing debit card from the kit received from bank.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
192 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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