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Complain to bank on missing debit card from the kit received from bank.

Complain to bank on missing debit card from the kit received from bank. pLMB9

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in connection with my debit card of newly opened account in your bank last week. I received the letter and kit from the bank but the card was missing in it. Further, the kit was torn from one side and I am afraid it may went into the wrong hands. I am concerned about it because yesterday I deposited money in my account and my phone number has not yet linked with it. So, I don't know whether my money is safe or not and even if it get withdrawn by wrong means by using the card I won't be able to know about it. Thus, I am requesting you to do me a favor by blocking my account for some time till I get my new debit card and my phone number get linked. I even registered a complaint with the courier service and they assured me to look after over this matter on priority basis. So, kindly process my request immediately and if you want any additional information do let me know I will provide it. Looking forward to hear from you. Yours faithfullyHarry

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card
 of newly
 opened account in your bank last week. I received the letter and kit from the bank This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetposterlabelprogramcalendarticket
card
 was missing in it. Further
, the kit was torn
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side and
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went
 into the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
 hands. I am concerned
 about it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 yesterday I deposited money in my account and my phone number has not yet
 linked with it. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, I don't know whether my money is safe or not and even if it Did you mean "gets"?gets
get
 withdrawn by This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
 means by using the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetposterlabelprogramcalendarticket
card
 I won't be able to know about it. Thus
, I am requesting you to do me a favor by blocking my account for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 time till I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 my new debit You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetposterlabelprogramcalendarticket
card
 and my phone number This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 linked. I even registered a complaint with the courier Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).service, and
service and
 they assured me to look after over this matter on priority basis. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, kindly process my request immediately and if you want any additional information do This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know I will provide it. Looking forward In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".to hearing
to hear
 from you. Yours Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphfaithfullyHarry.faithfullyHarry!faithfullyHarry?faithfullyHarry:faithfullyHarry,faithfullyHarry;
faithfullyHarry