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Complain about washing machines

Complain about washing machines Ep6eQ
Dear sir or madam. I am writing in the hope of that you can help me with a problem regarding a washing machine that I recently bought from your shop. After only two days, things started to go wrong. On the 23rd of December I visited one of your local shops in order to buy a washing machine for my mother. I looked around the shop finally I encountered item which I wanted then asked its cost as a consequence of knowing all information about I decided to purchase. In addition to washing machine your company give me an iron for a gift. After two days my mother made a call the reason why the washing machine went wrong. Firstly, it worked properly and clothes was washed clean and fresh Nevertheless the second time she utilized, it seemed to have been a malfunction while it was working. Even though she used several times the same thing was happened. Because of this reason I will look forward to change it in two weeks I expect it will the same type of unit and brend otherwise I will complain about Costumer Service Associations responsible for this problem. Yours faithfully Angela Joe.
Dear sir or madam.

I am writing in the hope of that you can
help
me with a problem regarding a washing
machine
that I recently
bought
from your shop. After
only
two days, things
started
to go
wrong
.

On the 23rd of December I visited one of your local shops in order to
buy
a washing
machine
for my mother. I looked around the shop
finally
I encountered item which I wanted then asked its cost as a consequence of knowing all information about I decided to
purchase
.
In addition
to washing
machine
your
company
give me an iron for a gift. After two days my mother made a call the reason why the washing
machine
went
wrong
.
Firstly
, it worked
properly
and clothes
was washed
clean and fresh
Nevertheless
the second time she utilized, it seemed to have been a malfunction while it was working.
Even though
she
used
several times the same thing
was happened
.
Because of this
reason I will look forward to
change
it in two weeks I
expect
it will the same type of unit and
brend
otherwise
I will complain about Costumer Service Associations responsible for this problem.

Yours
faithfully


Angela Joe.
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IELTS letter Complain about washing machines

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
199 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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