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Complain about washing machines

Complain about washing machines Ep6eQ

Dear sir or madam. I am writing in the hope of that you can help me with a problem regarding a washing machine that I recently bought from your shop. After only two days, things started to go wrong. On the 23rd of December I visited one of your local shops in order to buy a washing machine for my mother. I looked around the shop finally I encountered item which I wanted then asked its cost as a consequence of knowing all information about I decided to purchase. In addition to washing machine your company give me an iron for a gift. After two days my mother made a call the reason why the washing machine went wrong. Firstly, it worked properly and clothes was washed clean and fresh Nevertheless the second time she utilized, it seemed to have been a malfunction while it was working. Even though she used several times the same thing was happened. Because of this reason I will look forward to change it in two weeks I expect it will the same type of unit and brend otherwise I will complain about Costumer Service Associations responsible for this problem. Yours faithfully Angela Joe.

Dear sir or madam.

I am writing in the hope of that you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me with a problem regarding a washing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withengineapparatusautomobiletoolapplianceinstrument
machine
 that I recently This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 from your shop. After This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 two days, things This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to go This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
.

On the 23rd of December I visited one of your local shops in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 a washing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withengineapparatusautomobiletoolapplianceinstrument
machine
 for my mother. I looked around the shop finally
 I encountered item which I wanted then asked its cost as a consequence of knowing all information about I decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
. In addition
 to washing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withengineapparatusautomobiletoolapplianceinstrument
machine
 your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 give me an iron for a gift. After two days my mother made a call the reason why the washing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withengineapparatusautomobiletoolapplianceinstrument
machine
 went This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
. Firstly
, it worked properly
 and clothes was washed
 clean and fresh Nevertheless
 the second time she utilized, it seemed to have been a malfunction while it was working. Even though
 she This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 several times the same thing was happened
. Because of this
 reason I will look forward to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 it in two weeks I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 it will the same type of unit and Possible spelling mistake found.brandbreedtrendblendbreadbred
brend
otherwise
 I will complain about Costumer Service Associations responsible for this problem.

Yours faithfully


Angela Joe. 