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complaint to landlord about noise

complaint to landlord about noise oVL5b
Dear Landlord, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the excessive noise and disturbance coming from the new neighbour. In the beginning, I ignored it, thinking that it is temporary. But even after two weeks, they did not stop. As a result, my aged parents and my children are unable to sleep. This has been a terrible experience. Despite informing many times, they did not change. Noise like this has effects on everyone’s health. All the residents must respect the right to quiet enjoyment, like having parties earlier than late at night. I request you to make sure that they keep the volume low. Keeping the neighbours informed about the events. I look forward to your reply, I hope you give this matters your prompt attention. Best regards, Sandeep
Dear Landlord,

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the excessive noise and disturbance coming from the new
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neighbour
.

In the beginning, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ignored
it, thinking that it is temporary.
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But
even after two weeks, they did not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
.
As a result
, my aged parents and my children are unable to sleep. This has been a terrible experience. Despite informing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
times, they did not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
. Noise like this has effects on everyone’s health.

All the residents
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
respect the right to quiet enjoyment, like having parties earlier than late at night. I request you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure that they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
the volume low. Keeping the
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neighbours
informed about the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
events
.

I look forward to your reply,

I hope you give this matters your prompt attention.

Best regards,

Sandeep

IELTS letter complaint to landlord about noise

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
129 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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