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your company wants you to work in a different country, which country woud you like to live and work in ?

your company wants you to work in a different country, which country woud you like to live and work in? dpQ6r
Hello, my teacher. My full name is Nguyen Thi Huong. I am a freshman at Academy of Finance. I am currently a member of class 10. 30. Now, I would like to start my presentation. The question is that if your company wants you to work in a different country, which country woud you like to live and work in? Of course, with me, I will like to live and work in Germany for the following reasons: Firstly, Germany has a temperate and oceanic climate, cool, overcast and humid in winter and quite hot in summer. Secondly, Germany has a long cultural tradition, especially food cultural. Germany has more than 600 different types of bread, thounds of famous sausages, bear and beer festivals. Thirdly, Compared to other countries in Europe, the cost of living in Germany is quite reasonable. On the other hand, Germany is not only a leader in the group of countries with high wage, but also an ideal country to live, study and work. Finally, Germany has extremely good health care services with a clear insurance regime. Exspecialy, In Germany, people make a clear distinction between work and personal life. All these things make me love Germany so I’m sure I will choose it as a place to live and work. Above is my entire presentation. Thank you for taking the time to listen.
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in Germany for the following reasons:
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. Above is my entire presentation. Thank you for taking the time to listen.
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IELTS letter your company wants you to work in a different country, which country woud you like to live and work in?

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5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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