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Dear Jane, How’s it going? How have the family been? A number of thanks for your last letter. It was nice to hear from you again. I’m sorry I haven’t written for you such a long time because I so busy with my school task. Regarding to your questions, I’ll answer in the following. I and An have been friends for about 10 years so I know her very well. She’s a bit shy, however she’s humorous and friendly. Further more for her hobbies, she likes indoors activities and hanging out with close friends. In her freetime, she’s interested in reading books, listening to music and so on. Sometimes, she and I go out for a walk just for fun or chatting together about our job. In addition, I’ll talk about her job. Now she’s an English teacher at a secondary school so she’s going to take a course in London this summer. I think she will go there to study for about 3 months to enhance her English skill. Anyway, I must go and get on with my work. Give my love to your family. Look forward to seeing you again. See you soon. Best wishes,
Dear Jane,

How’s it going? How have the family been? A number of thanks for your last letter. It was nice to hear from you again. I’m sorry I haven’t written for you such a long time
because
I
so
busy with my school task.

Regarding to
your questions, I’ll answer in the following. I and
An have
been friends for about 10 years
so
I know her
very
well.
She’s
a bit shy,
however
she’s
humorous and friendly.

Further
more for her hobbies,
she
likes indoors activities and hanging out with close friends. In her
freetime
,
she’s
interested in reading books, listening to music and
so
on.
Sometimes
,
she
and I go out for a walk
just
for fun or chatting together about our job.

In addition
, I’ll talk about her job.
Now
she’s
an English teacher at a secondary school
so
she’s
going to take a course in London this summer. I
think
she
will go there to study for about 3 months to enhance her English
skill
.

Anyway, I
must
go and
get
on with my work. Give my
love
to your family. Look forward to seeing you again.

See
you
soon
.

Best wishes,
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IELTS letter Write an email to your friend

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
197 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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