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Because most important about culture and history can be found on the internet today, myseums are not necessary

Because most important about culture and history can be found on the internet today, myseums are not necessary m8p3N
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reckon that it is not mandatory
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claim that folks can
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history
with
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of
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cyberspaceTo
commerce with, there are predominant reason behind why
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people
believe that an internet is
merely
useful platform to enhance
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knowledge
about
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history
and
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culture
firstly
, with the advancement of technology
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people
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inhabitants
can obtain
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and
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culture
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knowledge
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people
adverts regarding conventional rituals ceremonies on the various website platforms
as well
as
also
uploading plethora of theoretical recognition as to
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and
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history
secondly
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history
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visit
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people
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in long queue by visiting a
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museum
for epitome,
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in USA
survey conducted 80% of local
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people
engrossed in their occupation that why they prefer to
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visit
alter website platform
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because
it gives gratification all of us as
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a Consequences
, with the
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help
of internet
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people
can
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valuable cognitive
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knowledge
regarding traditional
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culture
for the reason that it save the precious
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the other hand,
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museum
are not essential in my perspective the art gallery
still
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and
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history
in precise way, multitude can enjoy an instrumental music in
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art
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enhance
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historical
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events
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visit
in a
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for instance
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introduced various
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museum
and provide plethora of amenities for local
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people
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of tablets while according to my point of view
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people
should
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museum
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IELTS letter Because most important about culture and history can be found on the internet today, myseums are not necessary

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400 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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