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I can't decide whether to buy a new bicycle from a shop or on the Internet. Where do you think I should buy it? It is better to buy some things from shops? Do you buy things on the Internet?

I can't decide whether to buy a new bicycle from a shop or on the Internet. Where do you think I should buy it? It is better to buy some things from shops? Do you buy things on the Internet? QKoyX

Dear Tom How are you? I hope you are fine. I was very happy when I got a letter from you. Please forgive the delay in writing. I've been so busy. I know you can't decide whether to buy a new bicycle from a shop or on the Internet. I was wonderful to hear from you. If I were you, I would buy from a shop. Because it it very good! I can buy many type bicycle new. In here, the prices are very fair, the service also friendly and quick. At shops have many program sales so I can save my money. I often go there with my father. He is good at choosing a bicycle for me and it is very suitable. The bicycle very useful to me. It helps me go to school, play sport, . . . I really like it. Do you want meet me on Sunday? You can see it and we will go to coffee together. I'm glad. If you tell me about it in the next letter. I look forward to your reply Love Lilly

Dear Tom

How are you? I hope you are fine. I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 happy when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 a letter from you. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 forgive the delay in writing. I've been This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 busy. I know you can't decide whether to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 a new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbike
bicycle
 from a shop or on the Internet. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 was wonderful to hear from you.

If I were you, I would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 from a shop. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
It seems you either mean "it is", "if it", "it" or there is a comma missing: "it, it".it isif ititit, it
it it
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very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
! I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
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many
 type You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbike
bicycle
 new. In here, the prices are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :equitable
fair
, the service also
 friendly and quick. At shops have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 program sales This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I can save my money. I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 go there with my father. He is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 at choosing a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbike
bicycle
 for me and it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 suitable. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbike
bicycle
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 useful to me. It This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 me go to school, play sportDid you just mean "," or "."?,.
, .
Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
 I really
 like it. Do you want This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 me on Sunday? You can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).it, and
it and
 we will go to coffee together.

I'm glad. “If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 me about it in the next
 letter. I look forward to your reply

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
Love


Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphLilly.Lilly!Lilly?Lilly:Lilly,Lilly;
Lilly