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Motivation letter on mechatronics

Motivation letter on mechatronics J3k5w
My interest in mechatronics engineering was triggered by my love for lego, a robotics course, an internship experience, and my great interest in the topics physics and mathematics. My fascination with lego bricks began at a very young age. All of the blocks, in their many sizes and forms, astounded me. Installing railroad lines and deconstructing vehicles to their tiny parts to learn more about their components and what they're composed of was my favorite activity at the age of nine. After that, I used to reassemble the parts. Later, I stopped following the manual and began building my own models, combining parts from several cars to create a new and improved design. In ninth school, I joined in a robotics class so that I could pursue my interest in learning how to operate, construct, test, and design robots. It has also taught me to continually come up with new ideas and solutions to aid my community. That course developed in me a strong interest in both physics and mathematics. Physics and mathematics have always been my favorite subjects in school, and I have always excelled in them. In addition, I've performed several projects and activities in the subject of physics, including one for which I won a school competition. On a more practical level, I have offered to work at a vehicle maintenance shop in order to have a better understanding of automobiles, motorbikes, and engines. Especially when it comes to dismantling and fixing automobiles. This job gave me some experience in this industry and piqued my interest in learning more. I picked Hungary as the location for my study because I fell in love with the country after watching Youtube videos and doing research on it. Its natural beauty, varied multicultural nation, and tranquillity drew me back after all these years to pursue a high-quality education from top-ranked colleges. I am a dedicated, focused, and disciplined candidate. And my academic background and professional experience qualify me as an excellent candidate for your program. All of the skills and information I'll get from this once-in-a-lifetime opportunity will be brought back to my home country, where I'll be able to put what I've learned into practice and contribute to the betterment of my homeland. I want to use the knowledge I've gained from this incredible experience to help others in my community and propel my nation ahead. Through the Stipendium Hungaricum scholarship, I aim to pursue a childhood passion of studying mechatronics engineering at your prestigious school.
My
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interest
in mechatronics engineering
was triggered
by my
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love
for
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lego
, a robotics course, an internship
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experience
, and my great
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interest
in the topics physics and mathematics.

My fascination with
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lego
bricks began at a
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very
young age.
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All of the
blocks, in their
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many
sizes and forms, astounded me. Installing railroad lines and deconstructing vehicles to their tiny parts to learn more about their components and what they're composed of was my favorite activity at the age of nine. After that, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to reassemble the parts. Later, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stopped
following the manual and began building my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
models, combining parts from several cars to create a new and
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improved
design. In ninth
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school
, I
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joined
in a robotics
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class
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so
that I could pursue my
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interest
in learning how to operate, construct,
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test
, and design robots. It has
also
taught me to
continually
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come
up with new
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ideas
and solutions to aid my community. That course developed in me a strong
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interest
in both physics and mathematics.

Physics and mathematics have always been my favorite subjects in
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school
, and I have always excelled in them.
In addition
, I've performed several projects and activities in the subject of physics, including one for which I won a
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school
competition. On a more practical level, I have offered to work at a vehicle maintenance shop in order to have a better understanding of automobiles, motorbikes, and engines.
Especially
when it
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comes
to dismantling and fixing automobiles. This job gave me
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some
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experience
in this industry and piqued my
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interest
in learning more.

I picked Hungary as the location for my study
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because
I fell in
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love
with the country after watching
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Youtube
videos and doing research on it. Its natural beauty, varied multicultural nation, and
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tranquillity
drew me back
after all
these years to pursue a high-quality education from top-ranked colleges. I am a dedicated, focused, and disciplined candidate. And my academic background and professional
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experience
qualify me as an excellent candidate for your program.

Consider using "all the".
All of the
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skills
and information I'll
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get
from this once-in-a-lifetime opportunity will
be brought
back to my home country, where I'll be able to put what I've learned into practice and contribute to the betterment of my homeland. I want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the knowledge I've gained from this incredible
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experience
to
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help
others in my community and propel my nation ahead. Through the
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Stipendium
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Hungaricum
scholarship, I aim to pursue a childhood passion of studying mechatronics engineering at your prestigious
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school
.
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IELTS letter Motivation letter on mechatronics

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  American English
5 paragraphs
417 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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