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Your company is sending you to another country for one month. Your friend is living there and you would like more information about visiting the country. Write to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you will visit the country Ask for some information about visiting the country Suggest how you and your friend could meet there

Your company is sending you to another country for one month. Your friend is living there and you would like more information about visiting the country. Write to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you will visit the country Ask for some information about visiting the country Suggest how you and your friend could meet there r8Kwm

Dear Rebecca, I am writing this letter to inform you about my upcoming company visit to Dubai. Firstly, i hope that you and your family are doing well and are protected from pandemic. By the grace of Almighty God, we are also fine. I have recently been selected in a group by the company for the pharmaceutical technology project training in your respected country. Previously, our organization was awarded for one of the best pharmaceutical company in Asia which is manufacturing remarkable and widely used dermatological products that did record business last year. So the higher officials had decided to include the supervisors of the product processing’s and I am amongst the senior officer of the department who has got the privilege of getting this opportunity. The workout sessions will be held in the global pharma’s head office and we will be provided with the meals and snacks. so As we will be preparing our project in collaboration with other medicine companies production staff so let me know some of the best companies present there with their locations whose topical preparations are finest and effective so that we could enlist those and could do the surveys and could do some study to work in co-operation with those companies in future. Also do tell me about the nice places to visit in evening with our group and any reasonable and nice shopping malls from where I could buy some good quality clothes and some chocolates for the family. As we will have some leisure time in evening, I will definitely be found in my hotel room either taking rest or communicating with family so you can easily come to meet me there or to any nearest place to our hotel. I would really like to meet you after long-time whether in our place any nearest restaurants so that we can have a nice dinner together Convey my greetings to your family. I would be thankful to you and will look forward for your reply. Best regards, Farah khan.

Dear Rebecca,

I am writing this letter to inform you about my upcoming You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 visit to Dubai. Firstly
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i
 hope that you and your family are doing well and are protected
 from pandemic. By the grace of Almighty God, we are also
 fine.

I have recently been selected
 in a group by the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 for the pharmaceutical technology project training in your respected country. Previously, our organization was awarded
 for one of the best pharmaceutical You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 in Asia which is manufacturing remarkable and widely
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used
 dermatological products that did record business last year. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 the higher officials had decided to include the supervisors of the product processing’Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).s, and
s and
 I am amongst the senior officer of the department who has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 the privilege of getting this opportunity.

The workout sessions will be held
 in the global pharma’s head Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).office, and
office and
 we will be provided
 with the meals and snacks. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSo
so
 As we will be preparing our project in collaboration with other medicine You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
companies
 production staff This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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let
 me know This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 of the best You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
companies
 present there with their locations whose topical preparations are finest and effective This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that we could enlist those and could do the surveys and could do This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 study to work in co-operation with those You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
companies
Did you mean: "in the future"?in the future
in future
. Also
 do This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 me about the nice places to visit in evening with our group and any reasonable and nice shopping malls from where I could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 quality clothes and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 chocolates for the family.

As we will have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 leisure time in evening, I will definitely be found
 in my hotel room either taking rest or communicating with family This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 you can easily
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 me there or to any nearest place to our hotel. I would really
 like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you after long-time whether in our place any nearest restaurants This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that we can have a nice dinner together Convey my greetings to your family.

I would be thankful to you and will look forward for your reply.

Best regards,

Farah khan. 