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You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.

You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. AjPKn
Dear sir Patrik, My friends and I heard about the reputation of your restaurant, as a result we decided to choose your restaurant out of other luxurious restaurants. At first we were not sure about our choice, but when we entered the restaurant everywher was exactly the same as what I imagined in my mind. We wanted to celebrate our graduation from university, so we needed to do that in an area where none of us would forget about that in the future. We found out that the restaurant has a great atmosphere, and pretty garden to take some pictures as memorable. The food and the salad that we ordered was really delicious. Your staff were really nice and polite, because they were always ready to help us with foods, beverages, Even one of them was really helpfull and kind since she took thousands of pictures of us. Thank you for taking your time to read my letter. Sincerely yours Jalalifar
Dear sir
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Patrik
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My friends and I heard about the reputation of your
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restaurant
,
as a result
we decided to choose your
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restaurant
out of other luxurious
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restaurants
. At
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first we
were not sure about our choice,
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but
when we entered the
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restaurant
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everywher
was exactly the same as what I imagined in my mind.

We wanted to celebrate our graduation from university,
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so
we needed to do that in an area where none of us would forget about that in the future. We found out that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
has a great atmosphere, and pretty garden to take
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some
pictures as memorable.

The food and the salad that we ordered was
really
delicious. Your staff were
really
nice and polite,
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because
they were always ready to
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help
us with foods, beverages, Even one of them was
really
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helpfull
and kind since she took thousands of pictures of us.

Thank you for taking your time to read my letter.

Sincerely
yours

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Jalalifar
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IELTS letter You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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