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A construction project has recently begun near your home. There are loud noises coming from the construction site all day. In the last few days, the workers have been working until midnight. You are having trouble sleeping with the loud noise, and you have to wake up at 6:00 a.m. for work. Write an email to your local government and do the following things: • Tell them where you live. • Explain what the problem is. • Ask them to limit the time in which the workers can operate heavy machinery.

A construction project has recently begun near your home. There are loud noises coming from the construction site all day. In the last few days, the workers have been working until midnight. You are having trouble sleeping with the loud noise, and you have to wake up at 6: 00 a. m. for work. Write an email to your local government and do the following things: • Tell them where you live. • Explain what the problem is. • Ask them to limit the time in which the workers can operate heavy machinery. 7aLA3
Dear city council, For last couple of days, there is construction going on near to my residence side. It is really annoyed because they work until late night. Because of that, I did not have an enough sleep from last couple of days. I live near to Sheridan college at havelock street house number37. Before this project, this area was a very quiet. I wake up always on the time at least one hour earlier than my job and I never feel tiredness and weakness in the whole day. since, this work had been enrolling I am not able to work properly on a single thing. Each day I just hear a voice of machines, hammers and drilling and therefore, it set in my mind even I listen these sound on my workplace. I would personally recommend some suggestion, please try to do job between 8 to 5 with this most of neighbour would be outside when the construction will be going on. Also, they can build some noise proof walls outside their workstation with this move they could curb down the most of the sound. I know they have a deadline of their project while they should look on the people health who are adjoining of the area. I hope you will take seriously to my concern and I will see an immediate action regard to this issue. Thank you
Dear city council,

For last couple of days, there is construction going on near to my residence side. It is
really
annoyed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they work until late night.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
of that, I did not have an
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
sleep from last couple of days.

I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
near to Sheridan college at
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havelock
street
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
number37.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Before
this project, this area was a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
quiet. I wake up always on the time at least one hour earlier than my job and I never feel tiredness and weakness in the whole day.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
since
, this work had been enrolling I am not able to work
properly
on a single thing. Each day I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
hear a voice of machines, hammers and drilling and
therefore
, it set in my mind even I listen these sound on my workplace.

I would
personally
recommend
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some
suggestion,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
try to do job
Use "between" + "and" not "to." Try this: "between 8 and 5".
between 8 to 5
with this
Consider using "most neighbour" or "most of the neighbour".
most of neighbour
would be outside when the construction will be going on.
Also
, they can build
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
noise proof walls outside their workstation with this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
they could curb down the most of the sound.

I know they have a deadline of their project while they should look on the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
health who are adjoining of the area.

I hope you will take
seriously
to my concern and I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
an immediate action regard to this issue.

Thank you
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IELTS letter A construction project has recently begun near your home. There are loud noises coming from the construction site all day. In the last few days, the workers have been working until midnight. You are having trouble sleeping with the loud noise, and you have to wake up at 6: 00 a. m. for work. Write an email to your local government and do the following things: • Tell them where you live. • Explain what the problem is. • Ask them to limit the time in which the workers can operate heavy machinery.

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