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A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter -explain why uou want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. -describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful. -give details of when you would be available at work

A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter -explain why uou want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. -describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful. -give details of when you would be available at work Nr8qq
Dear Sir, This is regarding your requirement published on The Hindu Tabloid dated 10th April 2021. A museum is the collection of historical things which gives information to the people who are not aware of the past. If we can maintain the museum well, then it can be useful assets for the people. People who are visiting exhibition can be happy if a guide accompanies them during their visit to provide information about historical importance of collected items. I live near University of Texas and your museum is not so far from my residency. I can come there and spend my time to guide the visitors. I have just completed course in Bachelor of History. I have visited art gallery many times and tried to co-relate the collection of articles with the history. If I can spare few hours every day to make the visitors aware about exhibition, it can be beneficial for them and they can get more out of it. Generally, I work in the morning and I can be available at museum in afternoon from 3. 00 PM to 5. 00 PM. My name is Keyur Bhalodiya and you can contact me at 98987XXXXX. Hoping for your consideration and looking forward to volunteer as a guide. Yours faithfully, Keyur
Dear Sir,

This is regarding your requirement published on The Hindu Tabloid dated 10th April 2021. A
museum
is the collection of historical things which gives information to the
people
who are not aware of the past. If we can maintain the
museum
well, then it can be useful assets for the
people
.

People
who are visiting exhibition can be happy if a guide accompanies them during their visit to provide information about historical importance of collected items. I
live
near University of Texas and your
museum
is not
so
far from my residency. I can
come
there and spend my time to guide the visitors.

I
have
just
completed course in Bachelor of History.
I
have visited art gallery
many
times and tried to co-relate the collection of articles with the history. If I can spare few hours every day to
make
the visitors aware about exhibition, it can be beneficial for
them and
they can
get
more out of it.

Generally
, I work in the morning and I can be available at
museum
in afternoon from 3. 00 PM to 5. 00 PM. My name is
Keyur
Bhalodiya
and you can contact me at 98987XXXXX.

Hoping for your consideration and looking forward
to volunteer
as a guide.

Yours
faithfully
,

Keyur
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IELTS letter A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter -explain why uou want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. -describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful. -give details of when you would be available at work

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6.0
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