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Your company is sending you to another country for one month. Your friend is living there and you would like more information about visiting the country. Write to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you will visit the country Ask for some information about visiting the country Suggest how you and your friend could meet there

Your company is sending you to another country for one month. Your friend is living there and you would like more information about visiting the country. Write to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you will visit the country Ask for some information about visiting the country Suggest how you and your friend could meet there 9LaPw
Dear Sam, I am writing you to learn more about the American culture. As you know I was waiting anxiously for the Visa. Finally, I have got my visa and I am flying next week on Tuesday. My flight will land at 1800Hrs at JFK airport. I would like you to come and receive me at the airport and then we will head off to my hotel and have dinner there together. Although, I have got the list of places which I would like to visit in New York city but most of the list consists of hotels and restaurants where I would like to try their famous dishes which I watched on Youtube. I know very well about the American cuisine, but I know very less about their culture. It will be great if you will provide me with list of museums and historical sites within the vicinity of New York city so that I can have a sneak peak into the American Culture. I do not mind if you are selecting site is an hour or two hours outside the city as I can manage to visit there on weekends. Visiting America was my long dream which eventually is going to materialize, and I want to make this visit a memory which will always be remembered. Yours Sincerely, MAC
Dear Sam,

I am writing you to learn more about the American culture. As you know I was waiting
anxiously
for the Visa.
Finally
, I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
my
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
visa and
I am flying
next
week on Tuesday. My flight will land at 1800Hrs at JFK airport. I would like you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
and receive me at the
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
airport and
then we will head off to my hotel and have dinner there together.

Although, I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
the list of places which I would like to visit in
If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.
New York city
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
most of the list consists of hotels and restaurants where I would like to try their
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
dishes which I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watched
on
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Youtube
. I know
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very
well about the American cuisine,
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but
I know
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
less about their culture. It will be great if you will provide me with list of museums and historical sites within the vicinity of
If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.
New York city
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that I can have a
Did you mean "sneak peek" (=preview)?
sneak peak
into the American Culture. I do not mind if you are selecting site is an hour or two hours outside the city as I can manage to visit there on weekends.

Visiting America was my long dream which
eventually
is going to materialize, and I want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
this visit a memory which will always
be remembered
.

Yours
Sincerely
,

MAC
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IELTS letter Your company is sending you to another country for one month. Your friend is living there and you would like more information about visiting the country. Write to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you will visit the country Ask for some information about visiting the country Suggest how you and your friend could meet there

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  American English
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220 words
6.0
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