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Your car is hired from a company and while you are driving on holiday, you have a small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it. In your letter: - when and where you hired it - describe how the accident happened - what kind of action did you take after the accident

Your car is hired from a company and while you are driving on holiday, you have a small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it. In your letter: - when and where you hired it - describe how the accident happened - what kind of action did you take after the accident kYb08
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you about an accident that took place today with the car that I rented in your office at Heatrow airport two days ago. Although I arrived to London only for four days, I needed a car for my journeys, therefore I decided to take your service. After I had rent the car, I drived to a hotel to check in, as it was already night. I lelft the vehicle at the car parking at the hotel and went to sleep in my room. On the next morning I had been planning to move for my business, but I noticed that the automobile had a huge scratch on the left side and a broken back window. I called to the police and ask them to check CCTV cameras to find out who did it. Unfortunately, I left the transport in a blind area, thus cameras did not record anything suspicious. Yours faithfully, Arthur.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to inform you about an accident that took place
today
with the
car
that I rented in your office at
Heatrow
airport two days ago. Although I arrived to London
only
for four days, I needed a
car
for my journeys,
therefore
I decided to take your service.

After I had rent the
car
, I
drived
to a hotel to
check
in, as it was already night. I
lelft
the vehicle at the
car
parking at the hotel and went to sleep in my room. On the
next
morning I had been planning to
move
for my business,
but
I noticed that the automobile had a huge scratch on the
left
side and a broken back window.

I called to the police and ask them to
check
CCTV cameras to find out who did it. Unfortunately, I
left
the transport in a blind area,
thus
cameras did not record anything suspicious.

Yours
faithfully
,

Arthur.
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IELTS letter Your car is hired from a company and while you are driving on holiday, you have a small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it. In your letter: - when and where you hired it - describe how the accident happened - what kind of action did you take after the accident

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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