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You own an old item that you think is valuable and would like to sell. Write a letter to the owner of an antique’s shop. In your letter explain how you found the shop describe the item that you would like to sell Say how much you would like to sell the item for

You own an old item that you think is valuable and would like to sell. Write a letter to the owner of an antique’s shop. In your letter explain how you found the shop describe the item that you would like to sell Say how much you would like to sell the item for RNVlG
Dear Sir Ma'am, I am writing to express an interest to sell a item belongs to me at your showroom. I have an enormous collection of unique products from the ancient spell; therefore, I decided to exhibit one from those to the specific place. I came through your shop while surfing on internet and I saw that you are dealing with prosperous clients. That's hits to mind to opt your premises. The item, which can helps to collect money for me is handulam clock. The size of wall clock is 3 feet long and 1. 5 feet wide. It was bought prior to 10 years, and I can provide invoice related to it. The colour of clock is coper brown, and the condition of this is incredible. The machine of clock has recently replaced. However, I have enclosed the pictures of clock hanging on the wall with four sides. I have bought it for rupees 20000 and I am expecting rupees 15000. Having said that, it was renovate last year. I am looking forward to your positive response and the price is negotiable. Please feel free to contact me for the further details. Kind regards,
Dear Sir Ma'am,

I am writing to express an interest to sell
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
item belongs to me at your showroom. I have an enormous collection of unique products from the ancient spell;
therefore
, I decided to exhibit one from those to the specific place.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
came through your shop while surfing on internet and I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
that you are dealing with prosperous clients. That's hits to
The verb 'mind' is used with the gerund form: "mind opting".
mind to opt
your premises.

The item, which can
The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "help"
helps
to collect money for me is
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handulam
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
clock
. The size of wall
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clock
is
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3 feet
long and 1.
Writing for an international audience? Consider adding the metric equivalent.
5 feet
wide. It was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
prior to 10 years, and I can provide invoice related to it. The
Possible spelling mistake. 'colour' is British English.
colour
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
clock
is
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coper
brown, and the condition of this is incredible. The machine of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
clock
has recently replaced.

However
, I have enclosed the pictures of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
clock
hanging on the wall with four sides. I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
it for rupees
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
20000 and
I am expecting rupees 15000. Having said that, it was
Consider using a past participle here: "renovated".
renovate
last year.

I am looking forward to your
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
response and the price is negotiable.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
feel free to contact me for the
further
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
.

Kind regards,
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IELTS letter You own an old item that you think is valuable and would like to sell. Write a letter to the owner of an antique’s shop. In your letter explain how you found the shop describe the item that you would like to sell Say how much you would like to sell the item for

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
195 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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