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your company introduced a work uniform that you are mostly happy with except for one thing.

your company introduced a work uniform that you are mostly happy with except for one thing. 7QDk
Dear sir, My name is Poonam, and I am designated as an administrative officer in your company ABC Construction. LLC from last ten years. I am writing this letter in connection to an office formal wear which is recently introduced by your company for the employees. To be honest, I really want to appreciate the idea of applying the uniform on the staff members. Firstly, I would like to appreciate the febric of the formal wear which is cotton that suits to everyone in every season. Apart from this, the logo of the company also looks appealing on the shirt in red and white colour. Although, i really like the style and design of the formal attire but one thing that I donot like is the color of the trouser that does not match with the color of the shirt as well as with the logo. To be brutally honest, all the members of the workplace agree with me at this matter. Would you please, do something regarding the above mentioned issue. If I suggest that you should simply change the grey coated pant with blue color. To add to it, blue is an unique color which suits male as well as female office workers. I hope you will find my suggestion appropriate and reply me with positive response. Yours faithfully, Poonam.
Dear sir, My name is
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Poonam
, and I
am designated
as an administrative officer in your
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company
ABC Construction. LLC from last ten years. I am writing this letter in connection to an office formal wear which is recently introduced by your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
for the employees.

To be honest, I
really
want to appreciate the
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idea
of applying the uniform on the staff members.
Firstly
, I would like to appreciate the
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febric
of the formal wear which is cotton that suits to everyone in every season. Apart from this, the logo of the
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company
also
looks appealing on the shirt in red and white
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colour
.

Although,
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i
really
like the style and design of the formal attire
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but
one thing that I
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donot
like is the
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color
of the trouser that does not match with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
color
of the shirt
as well
as with the logo. To be
brutally
honest, all the members of the workplace
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agree
with me at this matter.

Would you
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please
, do something regarding the above mentioned issue.
“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
I suggest that you should
simply
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change
the
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grey
coated pant with blue
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
color
. To
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add
to it, blue is
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an
unique
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
color
which suits male
as well
as female office workers.

I hope you will find my suggestion appropriate and reply me with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
response.

Yours
faithfully
,
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Poonam
.
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IELTS letter your company introduced a work uniform that you are mostly happy with except for one thing.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
222 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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