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A friend of your is think of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. write a letter to you friend . In your letter; explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday, describe some possible disadvantages and say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer.

A friend of your is think of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. write a letter to you friend. In your letter; explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday, describe some possible disadvantages and say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer. 32md
It's been a long time hearing from you, much excited to meet you. I hope you were planning on a vacation this summer and you do not have previous knowledge or experience camping can suggest some tips. I highly recommend, holidays are beak out from hard-working days for refreshment and relaxation, and summertime is the best for a nature trip. Moreover, have an opportunity of meeting and chatting with diverse people and about their cultural practices. I have to bring up a few significant limitations; firstly, Whether condition since sunny days, you will experience hot temperature, skin burnings, and sunstroke. Facilities mostly champion distanced from the town do not have enough sources for cooking and drinking. Finally, wildlife and mosquitoes because champion sites are in forests. This year my employer offing me a long period of vacation. If you do not have second thoughts on vacation, I would like to join you. I am Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards, Bala
It's been a long time hearing from you, much excited to
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meet
you. I hope you were planning on a vacation this summer and you do not have previous knowledge or experience camping can suggest
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some
tips.

I
highly
recommend, holidays are beak out from
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hard
-working days for refreshment and relaxation, and
Consider using "summer".
summertime
is the best for a nature trip.

Moreover
, have an opportunity of meeting and chatting with diverse
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people
and about their cultural practices.

I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
bring up a few significant limitations;
firstly
, Whether condition since sunny days, you will experience hot temperature, skin
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burnings
, and sunstroke. Facilities
mostly
champion distanced from the town do not have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
sources for cooking and drinking.
Finally
, wildlife and mosquitoes
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
champion sites are in forests.

This year my employer offing me a long period of vacation. If you do not have second thoughts on vacation, I would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
you.

I am Looking forward to hearing from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Best regards,

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Bala
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IELTS letter A friend of your is think of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. write a letter to you friend. In your letter; explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday, describe some possible disadvantages and say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
163 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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